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Re: Pivot Practice: Combos

PostPosted: Sun May 22, 2016 5:52 pm
by Setto
how do you do it fuck
its so good

Re: Pivot Practice: Combos

PostPosted: Sun May 22, 2016 7:08 pm
by Math
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This counts as a combo too right?

Re: Pivot Practice: Combos

PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2016 4:21 am
by Euclid
Ocean wrote:Image

This counts as a combo too right?


Yeah, mane. I love your style man it looks so smooth and stuff. The choreography is just awesome and the fullbody looks very nice.

The only thing i can complain about tbh is the crouching pose he does at the end. I'd prefer if he'd kneel instead. Other than that, it looks pretty nice.

EDIT: wow i actually finished it.

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Re: Pivot Practice: Combos

PostPosted: Mon May 23, 2016 3:40 pm
by Crafty
It's been a while since I last made one of these

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Re: Pivot Practice: Combos

PostPosted: Tue May 24, 2016 3:52 am
by Euclid
Crafty wrote:It's been a while since I last made one of these

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Hey, that's pretty good! The attacks are chained pretty well, it looks smooth and it's overall pretty decent.

The only thing that bothers me is the lack of fluidity in the first punch and that pose on the end part. You can fix the punch by making the guy lean the torso forward more when he punches and punch the arm slightly upwards or downwards to make it stand out. As for the pose at the end spread the legs more and make it look more balanced. I have no problems with the rest as it looks very decent.

All in all you did an impressive job.

Re: Pivot Practice: Combos

PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2016 2:26 am
by -Y-
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New lvl lol, pb style

Re: Pivot Practice: Combos

PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2016 3:44 am
by Euclid
Kuro wrote:Image
New lvl lol, pb style

You finally posted lmao. I love this one though, the choreo was nice to look at.

Now this is faaaar from PivotBlimp's style. He's basically a choppier AlanDylan. And those repeating frames omg lmao. It isn't something that PB does but i admire your interpretation. You seem to have a recurring problem of powerless uppercuts and generally powerless attacks as well. I think you should add more snap and muscle control on it. I may be repeating myself but I need to emphasize that holy shit the choreography is very nice man.

All in all you did a nice job, you didn't get the style you were supposed to emulate but it doesn't mean it's bad. It's great.

http://i.imgur.com/y3gEBMJ.webm pivotblimp style : ^) (i fucked up tbh)

Re: Pivot Practice: Combos

PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2016 2:25 pm
by Hitman
Ok bro, how bout this
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Hey can you post more than one of your combos?

Re: Pivot Practice: Combos

PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2016 6:52 pm
by XElite109
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give me pp

Re: Pivot Practice: Combos

PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2016 7:05 pm
by -Y-
LOL In the nex post x'D

Re: Pivot Practice: Combos

PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2016 7:29 pm
by elixir
XElite109 wrote:Image
give me pp

nice combo mate

Re: Pivot Practice: Combos

PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2016 7:31 pm
by XElite109
ty :)
give me liberty or give me dicks

Re: Pivot Practice: Combos

PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2016 7:53 pm
by Hypo
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Gave this a try, wasn't sure if was gonna post it since it's only a couple of punches, but oh well.

Re: Pivot Practice: Combos

PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2016 8:01 pm
by Finom
Hot damn, I love that style so much! Please animate more with it <3

Re: Pivot Practice: Combos

PostPosted: Wed May 25, 2016 8:05 pm
by XElite109
Hype wrote:Hot damn, I love that style so much! Please animate more with it <3

im with him you made him feel like rubber or a spring or something its so fucking cool! The combo sucked but that transitioning to the combo pose was sexy beyond belief