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Keeping some rust off

Postby The Specter » Wed Apr 09, 2014 10:38 pm

Hey can anyone tell me why the ending looks so weird? Is he not reacting fast enough or something?

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Re: Keeping some rust off

Postby Clauraz » Wed Apr 09, 2014 11:41 pm

I think the arms should bend in then straighten down infront of him not wave over his head. Other then that something seems weird about it but not bad at all.
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Re: Keeping some rust off

Postby The Specter » Wed Apr 09, 2014 11:47 pm

Yeah I had it like that originally, Ill go back to that, does the reaction look slow because I think thats what it is
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Re: Keeping some rust off

Postby tuna » Thu Apr 10, 2014 3:49 am

He doesn't lift the origin off the floor perhaps? Anyway, the rest of it looked good, more like your older stuff now.
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