Pivot Practice: Combos

[Blademaster]

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Here's me beating the shit outta Flame (Fuck you flame you piece of trash. )[/center][/spoiler].

:O, RIP Flame.

:O, RIP Flame²

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I dont know what im doing.

Oh boy i love that stick/combo style. That is looking really nice :))
You're pretty sick man.
Btw come around at our clan discord bro. You're welcome there

[HectorAndres]

i made this, is valid? :D http://i.imgur.com/yrRkQ9r.gifv

[Blademaster]

i made this, is valid? :D http://i.imgur.com/yrRkQ9r.gifv

Really cool. :) nice background!
The combo was kinda stop&go-ish. It lacked in that "flow". I suppose you could've done the attacks stronger by creating anticipation before the attacks. That means he tries to get that tension before actually releasing an attack. :)

I am really surprised about your work. You really seem to enjoy animation. You should carry on man. You're really good :)

[HectorAndres]

thanks really thanks

[Setto]

thanks really thanks

You just keep pumping out these cool anims
Keep it up man ^-^

[Euclid]

rusty (idk what that last move is called so I couldn't find any references. Please tell me the name of this move. )

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rusty (idk what that last move is called so I couldn't find any references. Please tell me the name of this move. )

In my country this is called "Chave de Buceta". Dont google it.

[Acid]

rusty (idk what that last move is called so I couldn't find any references. Please tell me the name of this move. )

In my country this is called "Chave de Buceta". Dont google it.

I can say that is indeed true.

[TθPS]

i'm learning combos so i could continue my animation

Alan supposed to continue this, but idk what he's doing.

[Euclid]

i'm learning combos so i could continue my animation

Alan supposed to continue this, but idk what he's doing.

Improvement is real haha! I really like your choice of poses and your choreography is just absolutely spot on! It's also very smooth man, I like it!

The only thing I have a problem on is how most of the joints don't have any relation to each other like how the black dude blocks the blue guy's punch, the torso didn't even move much; and how the torso doesn't move on the flurry of punches the black dude does which makes it look powerless. Your poses have improved, sure but you still need to show some power in those poses. Don't be afraid to instantly switch to heavy spacing when it comes to it. You need to make sure that the guy attacking is shifting his weight through the attack through his poses. The reactions are also pretty odd mainly because of the lack of contraction on the joints. You should exaggerate them more especially on the more powerful attacks. There's also that stance thing you're doing :



Blue: Right way
Red: Wrong way

The reason for this is because the way you positioned the legs look highly unbalanced. Try doing that pose irl and see if you can attack as effectively compared to when you do the blue highlighted pose.

All in all it's pretty nice. You've improved, which is impressive. I dislike the "floppy arms" thing that you do but that seems to be your style so eh.

Alan is too busy doing flash now :(. I'll continue it if you want.

[XElite109]

yo tops move the head you cant have it static the whole time or the guy get hit and not ave his head knock back

[Setto]

I would finish it :^ )

[TθPS]

I'll continue it if you want.

yes please

Thanks for the CC guys

[FlamingSosej2732]

Made this yesterday morning...

Spoiler:

As i'm rewatching it, there are some flaws i noticed. There are some parts that are off balanced and about 3 other animators said that the green guy's reaction is off as fuck.
There might be some other flaws too, can yall help my horrible ass?

[Amir]

Made this yesterday morning...

Spoiler:

As i'm rewatching it, there are some flaws i noticed. There are some parts that are off balanced and about 3 other animators said that the green guy's reaction is off as fuck.
There might be some other flaws too, can yall help my horrible ass?

The stop and go was very noticeable in the last few punches, also at that time the back of the dude is way too backward. Should lean more forward because now it looks a little odd. Other than that, it looks great, good looking kicks and very smooth movements.