Tops620 wrote:i'm learning combos so i could continue my animation
Alan supposed to continue this, but idk what he's doing.
Improvement is real haha! I really like your choice of poses and your choreography is just absolutely spot on! It's also very smooth man, I like it!
The only thing I have a problem on is how most of the joints don't have any relation to each other like how the black dude blocks the blue guy's punch, the torso didn't even move much; and how the torso doesn't move on the flurry of punches the black dude does which makes it look powerless. Your poses have improved, sure but you still need to show some power in those poses. Don't be afraid to instantly switch to heavy spacing when it comes to it. You need to make sure that the guy attacking is shifting his weight through the attack through his poses. The reactions are also pretty odd mainly because of the lack of contraction on the joints. You should exaggerate them more especially on the more powerful attacks. There's also that stance thing you're doing :
Blue: Right way
Red: Wrong way
The reason for this is because the way you positioned the legs look highly unbalanced. Try doing that pose irl and see if you can attack as effectively compared to when you do the blue highlighted pose.
All in all it's pretty nice. You've improved, which is impressive. I dislike the "floppy arms" thing that you do but that seems to be your style so eh.
Alan is too busy doing flash now :(. I'll continue it if you want.
Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2016 12:09 am
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