by Jojishi » Fri Feb 03, 2017 7:49 pm
Your movements look good as always and the stick used is interesting. However, the thick segments hold the smears back from looking their best. It could look better if you gave the trails sharp edges, or alternatively just do the edge of the smear as a solid line and perhaps give it 75% opacity. I understand what you were going for but unfortunately it just doesn't look aesthetic in Pivot.
For the first smear, it would look better with a "wider" attack. So a punch that's less stream-lined and almost like a haymaker could look better.
Everything else is good though. Keep at it man.