Short unfinished animation i am probably gunna finish

[socks]

Shaky, colors are wrong, and i love it.

[Mitch]

Walk cycle was pretty nice man, just try and time your steps to correspond with the speed your entire base is moving. At times it looked like the legs were struggling to keep up with the bases upper body, that's why the steps seemed a little too wide.

Looks pretty neat so far bro.

[Silo]

interested to see the next few frames, as his feet begin to turn yellow at the end of this clip :)

[Waffles Mgee]

I'm an English literature/language student and I've been reading books all my life, mostly through skimming. I could only read that first two lines fully after the third repetition.

I'm a fast reader, so it probably took others more. Text isn't something you read instantly, try and have this stuff on screen more. if you want to make it look like it's interrupted just end a word early with a hyphen. Give people chance.

[Anton]

It took me 5 loops. Slow reading and foreign language.

[Looz-Ashae]

He was like sliding, not walking. In support of my words I've got to admit stick's head didn't circumscribe a sinewave. Maybe the torso was faster than legs. May be.
You could use more gravity.

[SIFTER]

You could read it instantly the easy way: Freeze the screen with lightshot (screen caprture tool)
Anyway, the animation is kinda decent and needs its spacing to be consistent.

[Waffles Mgee]

Not everyone has lightshot, sifter. And that's rather inconvenient if they need to do that.

[socks]

Thanks everyone, i'll implement the following to the animation!