TheDarkDemon

I'm going to upload here shorts combos.

It really looks like his torso is spinning, and it feels really weak overall. Try to keep the movements clear and give them chance to stand out, otherwise it's a bunch of cluttered movements you cant see clearly which makes it look like he was just flailing. I really hope I made myself clear lol

just add a frame - 2 frames after each punch to make it smooth out and slow down a bit, that way you can see what is going on, and the jump between the smoothed out movements to the next part of the combo will emphasis power

I actually like it like that. Esecially the poses appeal to me. I really want to see this kind of combos in your new projects!

I don't know guys, it was a really good combito, I know those were three punches, but to be honest I didn't understand 2 of them (possibly lag). The spinning and the kick were nicely done to my eyes, I hope to see something that good in your FFA entry, or even Better ;]. Keep it up bro (;

YeahI thought so too, it was a little weak, I'll try to add more power in my FFA though, thanks guys!

Nah thats enough power, no need to change anything for the FFA...

Yeah I actually really liked it though I do see their point when they say it looks like he's just flailing the problem is that while he's turning he's still attacking like mad as if he was still facing to the right because he's still attacking at the same pace I guess it loses it's sense of power none the less I love it

Update

Your axis of rotation styled shit is super polished.
Also I feel like the power was shown really well with the little head jolts.

Mitch wrote:Your axis of rotation styled shit is super polished.
Also I feel like the power was shown really well with the little head jolts.

Really? Thanks, that's what I was trying to do, but I wasn't so sure it was shown to well.

I feel like people tend to critique power if there is no other stick to react.
You nailed it imo.

That was pretty neat Amir. I agree about the power being displayed well. It's cool that you're using Yogurt's base. I like that base a lot too.

Jojishi wrote:That was pretty neat Amir. I agree about the power being displayed well. It's cool that you're using Yogurt's base. I like that base a lot too.

Aw...I thought it was your base, I took it from your Electric Clones piv. Thanks!