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Postby Amir » Fri Apr 25, 2014 1:12 pm

I'm going to upload here shorts combos.

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Just a movements practice befor I'm starting my FFA entry.

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Re: A Little Combo

Postby Cressel » Fri Apr 25, 2014 1:49 pm

It really looks like his torso is spinning, and it feels really weak overall. Try to keep the movements clear and give them chance to stand out, otherwise it's a bunch of cluttered movements you cant see clearly which makes it look like he was just flailing. I really hope I made myself clear lol
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Re: A Little Combo

Postby Silo » Fri Apr 25, 2014 3:07 pm

just add a frame - 2 frames after each punch to make it smooth out and slow down a bit, that way you can see what is going on, and the jump between the smoothed out movements to the next part of the combo will emphasis power

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Re: A Little Combo

Postby tuna » Sun Apr 27, 2014 2:50 am

Basically what Cressel said, there's no power behind the frames, just looks like he's throwing his shit out there, with no real backing from the rest of his body to add power.
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Re: A Little Combo

Postby Marvilicious » Sun Apr 27, 2014 3:00 am

I actually like it like that. Esecially the poses appeal to me. I really want to see this kind of combos in your new projects! (thumbsup
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Re: A Little Combo

Postby Ussay » Mon Apr 28, 2014 9:46 am

I don't know guys, it was a really good combito, I know those were three punches, but to be honest I didn't understand 2 of them (possibly lag). The spinning and the kick were nicely done to my eyes, I hope to see something that good in your FFA entry, or even Better ;]. Keep it up bro (;
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Re: A Little Combo

Postby Amir » Mon Apr 28, 2014 12:31 pm

YeahI thought so too, it was a little weak, I'll try to add more power in my FFA though, thanks guys!
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Re: A Little Combo

Postby The Specter » Mon Apr 28, 2014 1:02 pm

Nah thats enough power, no need to change anything for the FFA...
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Re: A Little Combo

Postby XElite109 » Mon Apr 28, 2014 2:14 pm

Yeah I actually really liked it though I do see their point when they say it looks like he's just flailing the problem is that while he's turning he's still attacking like mad as if he was still facing to the right because he's still attacking at the same pace I guess it loses it's sense of power none the less I love it
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Re: Combos

Postby Amir » Fri May 30, 2014 8:36 am

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Re: Combos

Postby Mitch » Fri May 30, 2014 8:48 am

Your axis of rotation styled shit is super polished.
Also I feel like the power was shown really well with the little head jolts.
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Re: Combos

Postby Amir » Fri May 30, 2014 8:58 am

Mitch wrote:Your axis of rotation styled shit is super polished.
Also I feel like the power was shown really well with the little head jolts.


Really? Thanks, that's what I was trying to do, but I wasn't so sure it was shown to well.
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Re: Combos

Postby Mitch » Fri May 30, 2014 9:01 am

I feel like people tend to critique power if there is no other stick to react.
You nailed it imo.
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Re: Combos

Postby Jojishi » Sat May 31, 2014 3:14 am

That was pretty neat Amir. I agree about the power being displayed well. It's cool that you're using Yogurt's base. I like that base a lot too.
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Re: Combos

Postby Amir » Sat May 31, 2014 3:16 am

Jojishi wrote:That was pretty neat Amir. I agree about the power being displayed well. It's cool that you're using Yogurt's base. I like that base a lot too.


Aw...I thought it was your base, I took it from your Electric Clones piv. Thanks!
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