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Postby Japa » Tue Oct 31, 2017 4:54 pm

I'm rusty at the pivot
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Re: catxin

Postby Michi » Tue Oct 31, 2017 5:27 pm

not sure if you wanted to show that the guy was trying to attack with the shield but it doesn't look good cause it looks really weak and it's mostly obscured by the sword spin. the sword thrust in itself is pretty weak too, maybe you could have dragged the sword behind a little bit or something. overall it's okay it's pretty smooth i guess so gj
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Re: catxin

Postby Japa » Tue Oct 31, 2017 5:44 pm

Mike wrote: overall it's okay it's pretty smooth i guess so gj

I don't now what mean "GJ"
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Re: catxin

Postby Michi » Tue Oct 31, 2017 6:03 pm

Japa wrote:
Mike wrote: overall it's okay it's pretty smooth i guess so gj

I don't now what mean "GJ"

it stands for good job
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Frank Thomas and Ollie Johnston - The Illusion of Life: Disney Animation
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Richard Williams - The Animator's Survival Kit:
https://vk.com/doc176415392_222242886?hash=5e3a8f0a7cbfa92e91&dl=bc6e3d465d2f9e012c
Spoiler:
12 Principles of Animation summarized
http://vimeo.com/93206523
Aaron Hartline and Victor Navone, animators at Pixar Animation Studios and mentors at Animation Mentor, discuss timing and spacing tips and tricks
http://www.animationmentor.com/resources/webinars/timing-and-spacing/
Pixar's 22 rules to phenomenal storytelling
http://imgur.com/gallery/E8xe0

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Re: catxin

Postby Youngster » Tue Oct 31, 2017 10:32 pm

it doesn't look like a sword thrust at all.
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Re: catxin

Postby Jack » Tue Oct 31, 2017 10:36 pm

sword seems super light, needs more weight to it for it to have any power
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