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Postby Behemoth » Tue Apr 29, 2014 1:56 am

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Re: run and arrow

Postby thebiscotticakeman » Tue Apr 29, 2014 2:12 am

damn behemoth that is pretty nice my only suggestion is that theres going to be a transition when he turns around like a split second front view
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Re: run and arrow

Postby The Specter » Tue Apr 29, 2014 2:55 am

That jump was amazing, the shot off the jump was amazing, and I loved the footwork while in the air, along with the landing. I thought that the second draw was a little too static, and could be improved with another step after the landing.
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Re: run and arrow

Postby The Black Mamba » Tue Apr 29, 2014 3:13 am

That was fucking cool.
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Re: run and arrow

Postby Mitch » Tue Apr 29, 2014 5:23 am

The actual jump itself felt really believable and was nice overall, you could probably widen your run poses and work off the last frame some more, things are looking a little blurry and I know you're capable of kicking the fluidity of that up.

Neat as fuck overall, needs more signature behemoth blurs.
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Re: run and arrow

Postby Extra » Tue Apr 29, 2014 5:40 am

It's was beautiful, I've been sitting here for 4-5 minutes just glaring.
And it's just a guy running into a wall, jumping away from the wall and shooting a bow.
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Re: run and arrow

Postby Mitch » Tue Apr 29, 2014 5:43 am

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Re: run and arrow

Postby Erif » Tue Apr 29, 2014 7:31 am

Extra wrote:And it's just a guy running into a wall, jumping away from the wall and shooting a bow.

Extra wrote:it's just a guy running into a wall

Extra wrote:just a guy

Extra wrote:guy

Goddammit

Anyway, I love you behemoth! :D
Those movements are just so pure and great. And because you did that with that stick, I just... just.. y'know.
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Re: run and arrow

Postby Mitch » Tue Apr 29, 2014 7:34 am

Erif wrote:
Extra wrote:And it's just a guy running into a wall, jumping away from the wall and shooting a bow.

Extra wrote:it's just a guy running into a wall

Extra wrote:just a guy

Extra wrote:guy

Goddammit

What?
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Re: run and arrow

Postby Erif » Tue Apr 29, 2014 7:36 am

It's supposed to be a girl.. :(
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Re: run and arrow

Postby Mitch » Tue Apr 29, 2014 7:44 am

Has nothing to really suggest that it is bro.
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Re: run and arrow

Postby Silo » Tue Apr 29, 2014 10:13 am

Add boobs. Case solved. Closed. Collect Paycheque. Book Vacation. Done.

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Re: run and arrow

Postby Extra » Tue Apr 29, 2014 10:55 am

Sorry for discriminating your stick's gender, Erif.
I should have considered that it was a girl even though it is an object on a screen.
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Re: run and arrow

Postby tuna » Tue Apr 29, 2014 10:57 am

Are you saying that women are objects? *rant rave feminism equality*
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Re: run and arrow

Postby Extra » Tue Apr 29, 2014 10:59 am

Hurr yearh! Womyn are only objects for my pleasure! M(MC

jk, lets quit spamming this nice and clean topic by Behemoth.
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