TheDarkDemon

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Thanks everyone for useful tips. Especially Mitch for his idea with pixels it really helped!

That looks so much better than the first one you made. Only thing is that the arms look a bit weird. I'm not sure if that's just me thinking the arms look weird, but either way, good job.

Yeah I think the same. Arms have some issues. I`ll try to fix them

Way better Bats. Smooth.

The spacing is really nice now. However I think you're trying to hard to obtain solid fluidity when you really shouldn't have to try hard at all on the count of the spacing being quite low, so basically I think the poses are a little to widespread and exaggerated for a walk. I think the result would be a little more tasteful if you toned them down.

KK thanks! Added newer version

Well, the spacing looks a lot better, but now I think it's too slow. The legs movements could use some work, they aren't smooth enough, they shake at times, ( or it's just me because my computer is working really slow), Idk it's just feel choppy.
2 last steps are too big, the rest looks good.
So the only problems I see are:
1: Too slow
2: Legs movements
3: 2 last steps

Amir wrote:Well, the spacing looks a lot better, but now I think it's to slow. The legs movements could use some work, they aren't smooth enough, they shake at times, ( or it's just me because my computer is working really slow), Idk it's just feel choppy.

It's not that it's too slow, its that the steps are too wide for the spacing so it appears slow and overly drawn out.

Arms jerk on the second step. poses are way too wide. Basically what everyone has already said. Much better than the first one.

bump i fixed the arms.. need to work on legs now

the body jerks a little bit . close to the end but It's quite awesome .