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Three Shorts

Postby socks » Sat May 17, 2014 7:55 pm

Sword Things
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Flipping things
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Sword Things 2 Incomplete
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Re: Two Shorts

Postby The Black Mamba » Sat May 17, 2014 10:24 pm

Think you broke your rust man, these are nice.
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Re: Two Shorts

Postby Lush » Sun May 18, 2014 12:34 am

I don't like that the head is the point in which the body rotates around and the amount of build up versus force & speed of flip, makes the physics seem a bit out of whack.

The sword one was ace, I have very few things to criticise except maybe making the back leg flick up a bit more on your run and the pose in which the slash ends, one arm is straightened out as it should be while the other looks like it's bent the whole way through. Other than that, the top animation is golden.

Looks like you have your form back, keep it up man.
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Re: Two Shorts

Postby socks » Sun May 18, 2014 12:39 am

The Black Mamba wrote:Think you broke your rust man, these are nice.
Lush wrote:I don't like that the head is the point in which the body rotates around and the amount of build up versus force & speed of flip, makes the physics seem a bit out of whack.

The sword one was ace, I have very few things to criticise except maybe making the back leg flick up a bit more on your run and the pose in which the slash ends, one arm is straightened out as it should be while the other looks like it's bent the whole way through. Other than that, the top animation is golden.

Looks like you have your form back, keep it up man.

Thanks to the both of you, I knew the bottom one was rather "off" but I liked the fact that it looked nice.
The first one was too short to have on its own in my opinion.
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Re: Three Shorts

Postby socks » Mon May 19, 2014 7:13 pm

Added one more, just in case.
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Re: Three Shorts

Postby Kirin » Mon May 19, 2014 8:18 pm

I liked the last one it's pretty smooth .
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Re: Three Shorts

Postby The Specter » Tue May 20, 2014 10:08 pm

Lush is right about the physics of the flippy one.

And like kirin said that last one was nice and smooth. You should continue it.
The best one was definitely the first one since it was one of the ones completed. The movements all looked pretty spot on to me.
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