It looks extremely similar to the piv you referenced, which isn't surprising. It's not a bad thing to copy their movements so long as you give them credit like you did. It's actually a pretty good learning experience, but next time you should try mixing your own style into the animation.
The main thing I don't like about this animation is the foot placement. It's not shaky, but after he does the spin kick he lands higher up on stage indicating that he is moving away from the camera, which he really shouldn't be if he's just doing a spin kick.
I like that your attempting things like this though, before you know it you'll make something just as good without a reference.
Also I'm not sure if you knew this already, but you can add titles to your links for things like your signature. Instead of just adding the link inbetween the image tags like [img]link[/img]. Sort it out like this [url=link]Title[/url]. For your thread it would look like...
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[url=http://thedarkdemon.com/viewtopic.php?f=18&t=675]My Thread[/url]
If you want it to look like my signature for example, just add the code above to your own signature.
Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2014 6:58 pm