Hey guys, need some help

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Hey guys, need some help

Postby Extra » Fri Jun 20, 2014 5:44 pm

Is the landing here really weak, or is it just me?
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Re: Hey guys, need some help

Postby Chris » Fri Jun 20, 2014 5:46 pm

It's between weak and reasonable, but to me it's pretty good. The animation itself is good, continue it man.

Edit: It just needs to be more frames in between his back kick and his stop/land. Say 3 or 4.
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Re: Hey guys, need some help

Postby Extra » Fri Jun 20, 2014 5:49 pm

Im on it then.
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Re: Hey guys, need some help

Postby Ray » Fri Jun 20, 2014 5:49 pm

Weak isn't the word I'd use. Maybe try making him react to the landing..Like bending his knees or something like that.

You should continue it though, it looks really good.
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Re: Hey guys, need some help

Postby Chris » Fri Jun 20, 2014 5:57 pm

Ray that is correct, not weak, but reaction.
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Re: Hey guys, need some help

Postby Extra » Fri Jun 20, 2014 6:01 pm

I made him do another step, does this look better?
Edit: made the gif 7fps for easier notice
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Re: Hey guys, need some help

Postby MCToast » Fri Jun 20, 2014 6:02 pm

It's fucking weird, he jumps super far and instantly stops.

Edit: fix the distance and the kick stuff. Boring animation non the less.
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Re: Hey guys, need some help

Postby Extra » Fri Jun 20, 2014 6:05 pm

Naah, the distance will stay, I quite like it
And the kick isnt even done dude so dont worry, it'll get better
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Re: Hey guys, need some help

Postby Chris » Fri Jun 20, 2014 6:07 pm

Just maybe fix the foot placement.
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Re: Hey guys, need some help

Postby Spock » Fri Jun 20, 2014 6:09 pm

He has too much momentum to suddenly stop like that... The step helped but still didn't fix it. Maybe do a roll or something?
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Re: Hey guys, need some help

Postby Extra » Fri Jun 20, 2014 6:17 pm

Thanks for that roll idea!
It made me think of another way to do stuff on this animation.
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Re: Hey guys, need some help

Postby Spock » Fri Jun 20, 2014 11:13 pm

Yep! Happy I could help.
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Re: Hey guys, need some help

Postby Extra » Fri Jun 20, 2014 11:30 pm

didnt upload the last update
this is the final gif ill upload, i like how it turned up
so what do you guys think?

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Re: Hey guys, need some help

Postby Jojishi » Fri Jun 20, 2014 11:42 pm

That's loads better. I can't spot anything wrong with that.

I know you've changed the animation, but I'd definitely recommend an arcing motion when the stick an stops and steps back. With the way you had animated it, momentum went to the left, stopped, and then went to the right. If you arched the origin it would have changed the direction o the momentum instead of stopping it. Another thing that would have helped would have been to use slower easing when the momentum is stopping.

But that's just some advice if you try that sort of thing again. As I said, the current animation looks much better.
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Re: Hey guys, need some help

Postby Extra » Fri Jun 20, 2014 11:51 pm

Oh, you mean in the first couple of frames?
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