Hit the stk on effects

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Hit the stk on effects

Postby JeffLm » Mon Jun 23, 2014 8:01 pm

COMENTT,My first animation posted in DarkDemon

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Re: Hit the stk on effects

Postby Chris » Mon Jun 23, 2014 8:11 pm

Lotta newbies taday, welcome soldier. TDD solutes you. (thumbsup
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Re: Hit the stk on effects

Postby Anton » Tue Jun 24, 2014 1:11 am

It's summer, nothing wrong about losta summer guys.

Welcome, here is some COMENTT about your anim :

- Something is wrong about redguy's reaction to the punch, he should go backward faster the moment when he's receiving the punch rather than after
- His arms are choppy too, when you move the torso, mind to keep the flow in the arms too.

And i must say that blackstick movements are way better than his opponent's. Especially the landing, hovewer, two things :
- When you had a big spacing with the punch, doing a big spacing with the feet too is a mistake that breaks the flow of the combo.
- The trail of the air kick looks wierd, i think it should look more circular than linear.

Overall, it's good that you joined now, i feel you can make quick progress through summer. I'd rank this med-beginner.
Don't forget to look at some tutorial.
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