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Where can I improve when doing combos

Postby Heklami » Fri Oct 20, 2017 4:57 am

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How did I handle the easing and other stuff
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Re: Where can I improve when doing combos

Postby Youngster » Fri Oct 20, 2017 7:34 pm

Welcome to Darkdemon.

You have nice poses but about the easing and other stuff you said, it needs improvement.
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Re: Where can I improve when doing combos

Postby Mage » Fri Oct 20, 2017 11:33 pm

i don't know if I'm saying this right, but on the first animation, it looks like the center of mass is changing rapidly when he hops up
don't worry about the character moving off the screen. if it happens, then you get to be lazy. i am 100% not saying that laziness is good. it's actually bad. if you want to keep him on the screen, shift EVERY frame. i recommend by 7 pixels. have fun! (thumbsup
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Re: Where can I improve when doing combos

Postby PG da boi » Sat Oct 21, 2017 9:17 am

Well, on my opinion you have to make best poses and try to make more easing and spacing, you have a good anticipation on all punches and kicks. I recomend for you this Tutorial
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Re: Where can I improve when doing combos

Postby Heklami » Sat Oct 21, 2017 8:33 pm

thank you for your replies now my eyes just opened up
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Re: Where can I improve when doing combos

Postby Heklami » Sat Oct 21, 2017 9:54 pm

I did Kratos(GodofWar) swinging his blades
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Re: Where can I improve when doing combos

Postby Mage » Sat Oct 21, 2017 11:50 pm

there you go! also, the way you animate the chains are kinda weird. you might wanna work on that.
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Re: Where can I improve when doing combos

Postby Heklami » Mon Oct 23, 2017 8:32 pm

this is my old animation but Do you remember this night when Goldberg defeated Brock lesnar https://imgur.com/gallery/ZLqHd
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Postby Heklami » Sat Nov 25, 2017 7:03 pm

I have grown a bit since I joined TDD
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Postby Heklami » Sat Nov 25, 2017 7:48 pm

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Postby Heklami » Sat Nov 25, 2017 8:30 pm

A lot of explaining but I decided to practice exactly how Senzo animated the wobbly Head bang effect by reanimating it Btw it gave my animating skills a boost so there it is https://imgur.com/gallery/3FsrC

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