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Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (Please check, need help.)

PostPosted: Mon Nov 07, 2016 2:08 pm
by MrDaril
Getting better.
Too bad there are not many opinions to be heard on DD anymore.
It's dying a painful and semi-slow death.
There are like 8 people online at most.

Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (Please check, need help.)

PostPosted: Tue Nov 08, 2016 3:41 am
by Youngster
MrDaril wrote:Getting better.
Too bad there are not many opinions to be heard on DD anymore.
It's dying a painful and semi-slow death.
There are like 8 people online at most.


Too bad, man. I want someone to criticize my work so I can improve.


Anyways, new update...

Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (Please check, need help.)

PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 7:01 am
by andyzeke
You're a fast improver no doubt. I rank you as Medium beginner (Maybe high)

Your newest animation is pretty nice, when the Green guy goes to punch, it doesn't really look like a full on punch. His stance is short.

Also, looking at John wick, I see you have shakiness in him (green guy again) when he stands up, and when the pink guy falls over he almost picks too much speed too quickly. Ease a tiny bit more near the beginning.

Finally, the stickman who shoots the pink circle and 2 kicks thing, In the beginning when he steps backwards his legs are still having shakiness and when he puts the gun down, that's maybe a little bit too quick. Anyway, that's mainly all I can cc for now.

Just make sure you try to keep your feet in the same place.

Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (Please check, need help.)

PostPosted: Wed Nov 09, 2016 11:47 am
by Youngster
New animation!!!

Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (Please check, need help.)

PostPosted: Thu Nov 10, 2016 11:37 am
by Youngster
Update: Image

Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (Please check, need help.)

PostPosted: Thu Nov 10, 2016 6:27 pm
by Valkyn
Is he trying to go against wind, or...?

Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (Please check, need help.)

PostPosted: Thu Nov 10, 2016 9:08 pm
by Youngster
Yes he is

Re: PivotYoungster's Thread

PostPosted: Fri Nov 11, 2016 12:34 pm
by Youngster
New animations.

Re: PivotYoungster's Thread

PostPosted: Fri Nov 11, 2016 2:01 pm
by andyzeke
New animations are pretty good, You have defiantly improved. Keep at it c:

Re: PivotYoungster's Thread

PostPosted: Sat Nov 12, 2016 12:49 am
by Youngster
andyzeke wrote:New animations are pretty good, You have defiantly improved. Keep at it c:


Thank you but what do you mean defiantly? :?:

Also, new update.

Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (A CC a Day Keeps the Noobness A

PostPosted: Sat Nov 12, 2016 2:35 am
by Im3000
Nice animations! You're really good!

Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (A CC a Day Keeps the Noobness A

PostPosted: Sat Nov 12, 2016 9:07 am
by Youngster
Im3000 wrote:Nice animations! You're really good!


Thank you soo much!! (smile

Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (A CC a Day Keeps the Noobness A

PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2016 1:16 am
by Youngster
Bump: Image

Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (A CC a Day Keeps the Noobness A

PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2016 6:40 pm
by Youngster
Update. Practice animations.

Re: PivotYoungster's Thread (A CC a Day Keeps the Noobness A

PostPosted: Thu Nov 17, 2016 2:28 am
by Youngster
Bump

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