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Sword Test

Postby Neborn » Sun Jul 06, 2014 10:44 am

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Hey guys,
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A tribute I made long ago.
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Re: Heyo :)

Postby Cheese » Sun Jul 06, 2014 1:01 pm

The looks ok, although on the second kick the leg isnt fully extended.
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Re: Heyo :)

Postby Neborn » Tue Jul 08, 2014 11:29 am

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Re: Heyo :)

Postby Jojishi » Wed Jul 09, 2014 8:03 pm

Just letting you know, I made a mistake. You're allowed to double post if it's updating your thread, so just ignore what I messaged you.

Your animations look good. I like the default animation at the top a lot because of the amount of power you showed. The combos were chained together really well.

The animation with the knife looked great. I liked the part where the black guy took the knife by doing the back-flip kick. The other guy could have shown more of a reaction though. You could have animated him taking a few steps back before the guy attacks him instead him of just standing there.

The baseball bat animation had some great flow and power in it. The only thing that could have used a little work was when the green guy started running. In one moment he's standing, and then suddenly he goes into a full power run. It needs to have more easing so that he picks up speed gradually and doesn't start running at full speed.

If you want to know your rank I'd say you're High Beginner at the moment. You've got a great sense of power and flow to your animations, but just a few minor things holding you back. Your animations are good, and please post that animation I didn't approve. I'm sorry about my mistake.
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Re: Heyo :)

Postby Neborn » Thu Jul 10, 2014 3:00 am

Thank you Jojishi :)

I'm a little bit rusty since I havent animated in so long... but yeah, glad to hear from you.
Here is a tribute I made so long ago, that I don't remember if I even showed it here on DD.

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Re: Update...

Postby Neborn » Sun Jul 19, 2015 3:17 am

This!
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Re: Update...

Postby Cheese » Sun Jul 19, 2015 12:30 pm

I liked the sword one, those fire effects are nice and subtle, but the first one is wayy too flashy
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Re: Update...

Postby Neborn » Sun Aug 02, 2015 8:17 am

Minions...
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Re: Update...

Postby Setto » Sun Aug 02, 2015 8:27 am

really good but it's too fast, i suppose thats just the gif speeding up
your animations are really good though man :^)
especially that bat one was cool
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Re: Update...

Postby Neborn » Sun Aug 02, 2015 9:01 am

I'm having trouble exporting it in proper speed. Could you explain me how to do it? Thanks btw :)
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Re: Update...

Postby Franklin » Sun Aug 02, 2015 1:29 pm

Neborn wrote:I'm having trouble exporting it in proper speed. Could you explain me how to do it? Thanks btw :)

Just lower the fps by two or three before exporting, and it should come out right.
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Re: Update...

Postby Neborn » Sat Aug 22, 2015 10:00 am

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Re: Ke pasa hombre...

Postby Mori » Sun Aug 23, 2015 5:31 am

It looks cool! Just a little bit of stop and go
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Re: Ke pasa hombre...

Postby Madnessthunder » Sun Aug 23, 2015 8:56 am

Fukkin NOICE.
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Hey check out my shitty animations
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Re: Ke pasa hombre...

Postby Neborn » Tue Aug 25, 2015 5:46 am

An oldie I continued today...
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