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Re: Testing moves

Postby Neborn » Sun Jan 24, 2016 5:04 pm

[Suplex]
I tried going for something more realistic...
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Re: Suplex

Postby Neborn » Mon Jan 25, 2016 4:40 pm

[Suplex#2]
I made it a little bit smoother this time. It came out way much better.
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Re: Suplex

Postby Husky » Mon Jan 25, 2016 10:21 pm

Looks pretty nice, not much to comment on.
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Re: Suplex

Postby Flame » Tue Jan 26, 2016 11:23 am

The red stick shouldn't jump along with the black one imo and the throw itself could use some more anticipation.
Apart from that really neat.
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Re: Suplex

Postby Neborn » Tue Mar 07, 2017 3:07 pm

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Re: Darksiders Inspired

Postby h0rseradish » Tue Mar 07, 2017 3:18 pm

Apart from the attacker being stiff on his legs while using telekinesis (or whatever caused the scythe to turn purple and fly at the defender) and the defender idling in a statue-like manner before being attacked, the movements are pretty rapid, yet fluent. I like it!

The suplex anim seems to suffer from similar problem - a stick stays completely still until it's attacked. I think that it would also help if you were to make attacker lift the defender more forcefully off the ground. Back to the stiff sticks, I get that you might choose to stiffen them for some reason. Make use of it for not, but whenever I stiffen my stickmen throughout the animations, I keep them awkward throughout the entire anim's length.
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Re: Darksiders Inspired

Postby Zaaz » Tue Mar 07, 2017 4:09 pm

Really nice animation, you're getting close to intermediate imo
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