talkie: After 2 years

by **talkiewalkie** » Sat Aug 02, 2014 9:28 am

Hi. I made this after a 2 year break. Not sure if I wanna finish it yet. I call it elemental wars, and the idea is that people of different elements fight each other...(if that didn't seem obvious) Any CC is highly appreaciated, and I'll try to return the favour.

New
Elemental wars

Before break:
Hangman

Spoiler:

Baseball

Spoiler:

by **Cheese** » Sat Aug 02, 2014 9:46 am

Welcome to the forums, seeing this is your first post
Since the anims here arent that long, i'll review all of them.

Elemental wars
It's definitely evident that it's been a while since you last animated, but i think you did ok, although some of the limbs of the black guy in the first scene bend the other way, and that whole starting scene seems to be stop and go. On that part try to use a little less easing. The rest of that one looks ok to me.

Hangman
I really like this one, with the colors and the detail to the background, as well as the water drop. This animation looks good for what the story is telling.

Baseball
The first guy slightly goes a little bit faster than he was at the end of his scene, and the second guy's leg moves up, down, then back up, although i know this is an older animation.

Over all, I enjoy your anims and cant wait to see more