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Re: TheXper's Thread

Postby TheXper » Tue Jan 06, 2015 5:19 am

thanks
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Re: TheXper's Thread

Postby TheXper » Thu Jan 15, 2015 11:20 am

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Re: TheXper's Thread

Postby SharpBeast » Thu Jan 15, 2015 4:03 pm

Hmm it looks very nice except one moment.... When he does that leg sweep it looks Highly unreal that he is doing that with straight back, he should bend while he does that leg sweep.(and why so big step before leg sweep? doesnt look like hit since it is not high enough for a move like that to be a hit.)

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Re: TheXper's Thread

Postby TheXper » Fri Jan 23, 2015 6:06 am

big update on youtube!!!

most of my animation from july to now.

Watch it here --> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3a5SrOXvTLw

and a new animation Image
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Re: TheXper's Thread

Postby Coweetie » Fri Jan 23, 2015 6:42 am

There is some shakiness in your animations, I guess because you want to get from one pose to the nex- try to ease the fast moments out where you want to switch from one pose to another. But I like that you look carefully on footplacement (thumbsup
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Re: TheXper's Thread

Postby TheXper » Sat Jan 24, 2015 5:20 am

thanks man
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Re: TheXper's Thread

Postby Mori » Sat Jan 24, 2015 5:23 am

TheXper wrote:thank man


Please correct.

Don't comment on his thread if you're not going to be helpful.
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Re: TheXper's Thread

Postby Amir » Sat Jan 24, 2015 6:29 am

Did you just tell him to fix his spelling or I just didn't understand properly?

That was a good animation TheXper, just need to work on your easing a little. Also, some of the poses are wrong.
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Re: TheXper's Thread

Postby MrMushroom » Sat Jan 24, 2015 2:53 pm

TheXper wrote:
and a new animation Image


Great poses and cool stickman!

:P.... i see a lot shakiness in foot :[
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Re: TheXper's Thread

Postby TheXper » Tue Feb 17, 2015 3:21 pm

MrMushroom wrote:
TheXper wrote:
and a new animation Image


Great poses and cool stickman!

:P.... i see a lot shakiness in foot :[


i know man, and thanks



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Re: TheXper's Thread

Postby TheXper » Tue Feb 24, 2015 6:32 am

update

360 hook kick test

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Re: TheXper's Thread

Postby TheXper » Sun Apr 26, 2015 5:58 am

Update
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Re: TheXper's Thread (Flow Test Update) give cc plz

Postby Franklin » Sun Apr 26, 2015 12:36 pm

The most immediate thing that I notice is poses- they look really unnatural and painful to be in. Try looking at Senzo's tutorial to see what the defensive position should look like. The figure is off balance because the front foot is too far back and the legs are too bent and limp looking. It would also be better if the arms during the punches only stayed straight for one frame before snapping back to the defensive position. More snappy back movement would help to show power. The movement of the figure is really stop and go; try to keep the momentum consistent and apply flow. That kick was nicer than the punches, but still has some problems. First of all, you need the lower leg to snap right back after one frame of being straight. I'd also probably have the back bent in the opposite direction during the kick. You will also probably want the legs in the opposite orientation during that last pose.

Just work on it a bit, and this animation, especially that kick, could look really cool.
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Re: TheXper's Thread (Flow Test Update) give cc plz

Postby TheXper » Sat May 16, 2015 6:34 am

UPDATE


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my sig stick (Aiden)'s armor test
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Re: TheXper's Thread (Flow Test Update) give cc plz

Postby Gouenji32 » Sat May 16, 2015 10:43 am

Awesome man !!!! I don't see anything that does not fit with the anim ! And the armor looks very cool ^^ Nice anim ^^ !!!
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