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Tosh's Animations

Postby Tosh » Mon Sep 01, 2014 12:26 pm

Hi, my name's Tosh, and this is my shit!

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Echo PW 2nd Round

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Echo PW 1st Round


Something I did to test Daniel's base.
Credits: Daniel and whoever made the ground stk.


I've been working on this lately, it was inspired by Senzo.
Credits: Senzo, Valtus, whoever made the base and McToast(?)


Something I put together after watching one of Echo's animations in the intermediate chat.
Credits: Cressel and Valtus.


This will be completed because I kinda dig it.
Credits: Marvilicious and Tiger (I think).

Something I did in 2012 before quitting for a while.
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Re: Tosh's Animations

Postby Clusive » Tue Sep 02, 2014 2:15 pm

this is nice
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Re: Tosh's Animations

Postby Anton » Tue Sep 02, 2014 5:25 pm

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I don't think that leg trails are necessary in these moves. Overall it's pretty good.
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Re: Tosh's Animations

Postby Tosh » Tue Sep 02, 2014 5:59 pm

yea, the leg trails are kinda useless but at the time I thought they just made the run look prettier I guess ahah
Thanks for the feedback.
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Re: Tosh's Animations

Postby Mat » Tue Sep 02, 2014 9:27 pm

Mr Tosh wrote:I thought they just made the run look prettier

Looks pretty bad in my opinion.
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Re: Tosh's Animations

Postby Tosh » Wed Sep 03, 2014 9:10 am

Mat wrote:
Mr Tosh wrote:I thought they just made the run look prettier

Looks pretty bad in my opinion.


Well, I'll try changing it, then.
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Re: Tosh's Animations

Postby Daniël » Thu Sep 04, 2014 2:44 am

I quite liked the run trails, they gave it a unique effect.

You're pretty good, at least High Beginner. Try to think outside of the box and push your boundaries and you'll be Intermediate in no time.
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Re: Tosh's Animations

Postby Tosh » Thu Sep 04, 2014 1:07 pm

@Daniel Thanks for the tip, man! Ahah I can't really picture myself getting Intermediate any time soon but thanks anyways!
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Re: Tosh's Animations

Postby Ashero » Thu Sep 04, 2014 5:44 pm

Mr Tosh wrote:@Daniel Thanks for the tip, man! Ahah I can't really picture myself getting Intermediate any time soon but thanks anyways!

Lies. B4 the end of year, (if you keep steady animations coming to us) you'll be interz.
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Re: Tosh's Animations

Postby The Specter » Thu Sep 04, 2014 6:16 pm

Anton wrote:Image

I don't think that leg trails are necessary in these moves. Overall it's pretty good.


Pretty much what anton said. But the real problem with this animation is that your spacing before and during the jumps. He was running super quickly but then he slowed down too much before the main jump (coming from that little jump), and as a result it looked rather weak. Try to keep him going the same speed, and over exaggerate the bending pose in the jump. The double framing didnt look bad, maybe just a little too much.
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Re: Tosh's Animations

Postby Tosh » Thu Sep 04, 2014 6:41 pm

@Ashero Thanks, man! When I put my head into it I animate at a fairly steady rythm so I bet I'll be a posting new animations constantly.
@The Specter I see what you mean, if I ever get around to finishing that animation, I'll be sure to try and fix that (both the double framing and the spacing inconsistencies)! Thanks for the feedback!

Anyways, here's an update on the animation on the top:

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PS: I'm fully aware at how rushed the ending to the grey dude's part looks, I just couldn't get it right.

Credits to The Black Mamba for the Vegito stk and Blaze for his sig.
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Re: Tosh's Animations

Postby The Specter » Thu Sep 04, 2014 8:09 pm

Dude thats looking really great, just some flow inconsistencies whenever they are about to leave. Try to make the origin go in more of a circle motion when changing direction rather than a straight line that retraces itself on the way back. They curve of a circular motion lets you keep the spacing constant while turning around. Seriously if you fix that, it would be pretty damn good. Also I loved the black stick's poses when he was on the wall, and i think there was double framing and it all loooked really nice. Well done man!
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Re: Tosh's Animations

Postby Tosh » Thu Sep 04, 2014 8:18 pm

Thanks, man! Yeah, about the whole part when the stick turns around, I was having a lot of problems with it, so I just half-assed it, I still struggle a bit with the spacing.
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Re: Tosh's Animations

Postby Tosh » Sun Sep 07, 2014 4:05 pm

BUMP

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Credits: Daniel for the base and whoever made the ground stk.
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Re: Tosh's Animations

Postby Daniël » Sun Sep 07, 2014 6:32 pm

That's fucking rad, mate.Better than I could ever animate it! Really glad that you made such an animation with it, I actually see real Intermediate quality here.
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