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Re: Beginner Animation Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Drakus » Sun Aug 13, 2017 11:11 pm

A Gigasaur Roaring what do you guys think?
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Re: Beginner Animation Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Meh » Sun Aug 13, 2017 11:59 pm

Drakus wrote:A Gigasaur Roaring what do you guys think?
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wow, cool animation :)
but i think this need more weight, and his hands(?, or front legs??) is a little shaky and stiff
his mouth was stop for a moment went he's about to roar and his head is a little choppy too
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Re: Beginner Animation Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Drakus » Mon Aug 14, 2017 6:39 am

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Drakus wrote:A Gigasaur Roaring what do you guys think?
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wow, cool animation :)
but i think this need more weight, and his hands(?, or front legs??) is a little shaky and stiff
his mouth was stop for a moment went he's about to roar and his head is a little choppy too

Alright I tried fixing up the arm movement. But he's just lunging to roar this one, not really stomping.
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Re: Beginner Animation Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Blademaster » Tue Aug 15, 2017 2:20 am

Yo, the roar kinda lacks in power/impact. Also the timing seems to be off. He should've had his mouth closed until the point he goes for the roar. Maybe let him lean back a bit and then release the roar within 1-2 frames. Like he'd charge up and then pumps it out. If he charges the roar, it will have some more anticipation.
His jaw should kinda vibrate while roaring (idk how to explain). Maybe add some substitle effect like particles/liquid/shockwave.
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Re: Beginner Animation Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Drakus » Tue Aug 15, 2017 4:20 am

Blademaster wrote:Yo, the roar kinda lacks in power/impact. Also the timing seems to be off. He should've had his mouth closed until the point he goes for the roar. Maybe let him lean back a bit and then release the roar within 1-2 frames. Like he'd charge up and then pumps it out. If he charges the roar, it will have some more anticipation.
His jaw should kinda vibrate while roaring (idk how to explain). Maybe add some substitle effect like particles/liquid/shockwave.

Alright, this is rather a warning roar so I didn't make him lean back.
There'll be sounds and some external effects added to the roar.
But I've managed to fix the gaping jaw:
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Re: Beginner Animation Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Drakus » Sun Aug 20, 2017 9:39 pm

1st Time attempting a punch like this, as well with the bouncing flow.
I'm wide open for honest criticism. (cheesygrin
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Re: Beginner Animation Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Cristiano123 » Tue Aug 22, 2017 5:00 pm

Hi guys, how do I send my animations?
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Re: Beginner Animation Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby yungdissy » Tue Aug 22, 2017 7:37 pm

Hey, you're pretty good
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Re: Beginner Animation Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Drakus » Wed Aug 23, 2017 2:22 am

yungdissy wrote:Hey, you're pretty good
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I legit can't stop bobbing my head to this. It sounds something like a beat for a rap dude. Lmao
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Re: Beginner Animation Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby yungdissy » Wed Aug 23, 2017 3:27 am

Hell yeah pimp
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Pls check out my animations

Postby Roxer7 » Thu Aug 24, 2017 9:09 pm

Imgur kinda sped em up but please tell me what you think
http://imgur.com/Fm2IM9U
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Re: Beginner Animation Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Xeroz » Thu Sep 14, 2017 5:28 pm

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Alright, so...
I tried to make a speedy-hits animation amd although I'm somewhat happy with the result, I'm also somewhat unhappy with it at the same time.
I'm pretty sure I didn't execute any of the fundamentals right, but at the same time, I'm not sure how to fix them.
Hence, I came here. How can I make this better?
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Re: Beginner Animation Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Blademaster » Sat Sep 16, 2017 7:19 am

Xeroz wrote:Image

Alright, so...
I tried to make a speedy-hits animation amd although I'm somewhat happy with the result, I'm also somewhat unhappy with it at the same time.
I'm pretty sure I didn't execute any of the fundamentals right, but at the same time, I'm not sure how to fix them.
Hence, I came here. How can I make this better?


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Re: Beginner Animation Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby Alexis » Sat Sep 16, 2017 8:45 am

Xeroz wrote:Image

Alright, so...
I tried to make a speedy-hits animation amd although I'm somewhat happy with the result, I'm also somewhat unhappy with it at the same time.
I'm pretty sure I didn't execute any of the fundamentals right, but at the same time, I'm not sure how to fix them.
Hence, I came here. How can I make this better?


eyo its nice to see you still animating xer! and like i heard somewhere that in order to make a punch look powerful, the foot doesn't have to go stomp forward if the punch is going forward per se, but in like the front foot should be kept stumped when the punch is being charged and hitting
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Re: Beginner Animation Chat/ Showoff [01]

Postby farzad1382 » Sat Sep 16, 2017 10:15 am

Hello :)
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