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gotta try it for real in some animation but that will probably make stuff more complicated since you cant drag frames around to check for the onion layers
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Get Off Damn it
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Preview DDC XIII. Hello Beginners Chat.
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I know it isn't to be taken seriously, but I would also recommend finding a better place/background color or text color because it's hard to read in a dark background, on short notice. I'm definitely interested in the fullbodies though Leo!

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Okay Hype. Meh bgs need more light than emo.
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If I recall bgs are backgrounds?
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2.2.7 stks?
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I like it, maybe ease a bit more, some actions seem really quick, and then suddenly stop before jerking into action again.
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cool combo bro! maybe looks too pressury bcuz of that "stop n go" ease? why i comment like that? O~O
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Hype wrote:I like it, maybe ease a bit more, some actions seem really quick, and then suddenly stop before jerking into action again.
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Yeah but I'm trying to pinpoint what's wrong...

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Hype wrote:Yeah but I'm trying to pinpoint what's wrong...

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I shouldn't have gotten up early to do this. Any and all CC will be greatly appreciated (cheesygrin
I think the pose in the last frame look weird
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That's pretty cool man, the lower body movements are pretty well eased, but I do see something weird. when he goes from the high kick to the stomp, it's kind of jerky/stop and go.
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Yeah I see what you mean. I guess I kinda wanted to just make it more snappy (for more power?) I appreciate the CC though!
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