Salvation's Animations

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Salvation's Animations

Postby SalvationSign » Wed Sep 10, 2014 12:32 am


Back after a 7~ year hiatus! And boy is it exciting.


Anyway.

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This is my first animation in a long time, so I figured I'd do something simple.

Its nice to be making things again, so feel free to tell me what you think, and what areas to improve on.
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Re: Salvation's Animations

Postby The Black Mamba » Wed Sep 10, 2014 12:56 am

That was quick. Didn't think you'd have a thread up that quick after your entrance thread. There's definitely rust, you have a lot to work on. This was still a cool animation none the less. GJ.
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Re: Salvation's Animations

Postby Mori » Fri Sep 12, 2014 6:38 am

foot placement duuude
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Re: Salvation's Animations

Postby Chris » Fri Sep 12, 2014 7:28 am

Keep practicing. Though the foot placement reminds me of one of lg59's animations
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Re: Salvation's Animations

Postby STIKY55 » Mon Sep 15, 2014 8:24 pm

Def wanna work on the foot placement. One trick is to add a stick that has a bunch of even dynamic segments make it invisible, and set a floor line above the feet (between knee and chest level). Also you will want to work on supporting movements through out the whole body. A punch should be seen through out the whole body. Move more sections to make every movement seem more natural.
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