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Re: ThePivotWarrior Thread*

Postby pivotwar » Sun Oct 05, 2014 2:38 pm

Daniël wrote:Well your effects are better than your movements, that's for sure.


It's not easy,Idiot.I have improved in a short time.Go and see my old animations,idiot. (sfrown (sfrown (sfrown
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Re: ThePivotWarrior Thread*

Postby Michi » Sun Oct 05, 2014 3:00 pm

Your fire effect was pretty sexy, but the movements lack smoothness in em.
Overall med beginner.
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Re: ThePivotWarrior Thread*

Postby Grams » Sun Oct 05, 2014 3:33 pm

pivotwar wrote:
Daniël wrote:Well your effects are better than your movements, that's for sure.


It's not easy,Idiot.I have improved in a short time.Go and see my old animations,idiot. (sfrown (sfrown (sfrown

Woah, bro. He's just saying the movements themselves need more attention to detail. Flashy effects don't make up for mediocre motion.
Guess he could've been less blatant. Although, if you're going to insult someone, at least use more diverse slander.
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Re: ThePivotWarrior Thread*

Postby pivotwar » Mon Oct 06, 2014 12:16 am

GTSYankee wrote:
pivotwar wrote:
Daniël wrote:Well your effects are better than your movements, that's for sure.


It's not easy,Idiot.I have improved in a short time.Go and see my old animations,idiot. (sfrown (sfrown (sfrown

Woah, bro. He's just saying the movements themselves need more attention to detail. Flashy effects don't make up for mediocre motion.
Guess he could've been less blatant. Although, if you're going to insult someone, at least use more diverse slander.


I misunderstood , sorry!I was feeling really offended!Thanks for explaining bro.
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Re: ThePivotWarrior Thread*

Postby XElite109 » Mon Oct 06, 2014 1:05 pm

I really like that fire ball thing you got going on but yeah man you need to improve your moves better by smoothening them out more also fix your poses cause he'd fallen over or stepped forward after that kick. Anyhow good job.
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Re: ThePivotWarrior Thread*

Postby FlamingSosej2732 » Mon Oct 06, 2014 2:08 pm

Your newest anim is shaky at the end, but the fire was nice!
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Re: ThePivotWarrior Thread*

Postby pivotwar » Mon Oct 06, 2014 3:55 pm

FlamingSosej2732 wrote:Your newest anim is shaky at the end, but the fire was nice!
It's because i was focused on the fire effect , but i'll try to fix it!
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Re: ThePivotWarrior Thread*

Postby Daniël » Mon Oct 06, 2014 4:58 pm

GTSYankee wrote:
pivotwar wrote:
Daniël wrote:Well your effects are better than your movements, that's for sure.


It's not easy,Idiot.I have improved in a short time.Go and see my old animations,idiot. (sfrown (sfrown (sfrown

Woah, bro. He's just saying the movements themselves need more attention to detail. Flashy effects don't make up for mediocre motion.
Guess he could've been less blatant. Although, if you're going to insult someone, at least use more diverse slander.

With all due respect to you GTSY, that's not what I meant.

What I actually meant, and I might have worded it much too complicated, was that your effects are better than your movements.

And because that statement is probably not abundantly clear enough, I took it upon myself to put it into a graph:

Your effects > Your movements



It's not an insult, it's not a compliment, it's a statement. And if you get butthurt over that, you probably shouldn't be showcasing anything at all, before you get some actual criticism that's not fully sugarcoated.
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Re: ThePivotWarrior Thread*

Postby Grams » Mon Oct 06, 2014 5:03 pm

Daniël wrote:With all due respect to you GTSY, that's not what I meant.

My apologies. Kind of hard to tell over text-only. I shouldn't have taken it upon myself to translate. I shall sit in the corner now.
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Re: ThePivotWarrior Thread*

Postby tuna » Wed Oct 08, 2014 1:52 pm

Goddammit darkdemon
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