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Animation #1-iceboy

Postby Iceboy7 » Mon Oct 20, 2014 6:02 pm

The very short but I did not have time esque I accept critics tell me what I need to improve thanks! http://minus.com/i/bttY4Tp5eGzVF
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Re: Animation #1-iceboy

Postby Daniël » Tue Oct 21, 2014 9:20 am

Don't draw trails on places where the sword hasn't been, it can't grow the opposite way of the direction of the sword.
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Re: Animation #1-iceboy

Postby Iceboy7 » Tue Oct 21, 2014 5:22 pm

Ok'll fix or are other animation thanks! : D
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Re: Animation #1-iceboy

Postby PinkPivot » Wed Oct 22, 2014 3:33 pm

Towards the end, it starts to look like he has one hand. Avoid that.
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