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DickBallsDickBalls wrote:Well, before i give anything more than a link for criticism. Check this out, it can say a lot more than i can at the moment.
Mitchs Tut
Spacing Tut
Alright, I want to reiterate what I said earlier. I can see some improvement, but I'd focus on that easing man, and making sure there isn't any stiffness(at the least, all joints should move in each frame.)
I will add on, that you need to watch your foot-placement, that way your not roughly sliding everywhere, but you can really see him move into the punch and poses. Both of which need some work.
Now, I will admit you have improved, I also liked the setting and stks man, good job.
Your easing, though poor, is definitely improved my friend. Good job, just keep workin' it out.
Clusive wrote:I really like your style... It seems so.. I don't know. Sharp? I can't describe it.
MatureZoom Zoom wrote:Clusive wrote:I really like your style... It seems so.. I don't know. Sharp? I can't describe it.
I can agree, definitely in focus.
Jojishi wrote:I really liked that you attempt to show depth through the shoulders you've added to the figure, and also that one part in the animation where the green figure turns around. It shows that you're visualizing them in a 3D space which is a great skill to develop.
Other than that, I think the challenge of easing has been brought up by Caleb, so I won't add much there. You just need to work on your spacing and easing in general, as some movements are jerky in motion. I think you've got potential though. Enjoying the slight style you've got going for you.
DickBallsDickBalls wrote:I think the newest animation is actually decently entertaining! It's hard to rate the two men with swords at the moment, with it being so short. But the cloak test honestly could be promising if you used it in an animation.
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