TheDarkDemon

Pulse wrote:You gotta work on easing and flow. Your stuff is kinda choppy and wooden (is that a word?).
And also, continue that 'into the light' thing, I think it has some potential.
Keep up the good work. =)

It's ''wooden'' cuz I dont rubber them much. well stiffness is just me being lazy.
You are the first one who said something about Into the Light. Since you want me to continue I will do that. Im glad actually.

I can't see the most recent bro, link seems to be broken. D;

Ussay wrote:I can't see the most recent bro, link seems to be broken. D;

That's weird... it works fine to me, both gif's are working..
Maybe try reload page or somethin. If it still does not work, let me know. Ill re-upload them.

You have a first spoiler before the ninjutsu anim which might be misleading, I thought your anim was there...

Anyways, there's not that much movement in the anim, it's very static and therefor a tad dull. If you could add subtle movements to the effect the animation would be much more interesting, like the ball moving up and down like it was floating, and the lines changing color or opacity.
I understand the body being still and I don't have a big problem with that but the pose could be a bit stronger. The arms are also a bit shaky and choppy.

Other than that, everything that moved looked good, the colors are good and I really liked the flashes, specially the first one with the little bit of purple in the mix.

Keep it up man, I'm not very up to par with today's standard but I'd say this specific animation is med-beginner quality.

Still unable to see it bro D=

Ussay wrote:Still unable to see it bro D=

:-/
I re-uploaded them, since for everyone else it seems to be working fine I will put the links here.
Teaser: http://postimg.org/image/b8bbayuf1/
Ninjutsu training: http://postimg.org/image/88caj2oqr/

Hope it works. Let me know if it doesn't, ill upload on different site then.

The height of that flip was very unnatural. I mean, I like unnatural things (I'm unnatural myself XD) but that wasn't physically correct. Instead of going vertically, he should have gone waaaaay horizontally. By making him reach such a high altitude, you're informing us that all his forward momentum ceased at once, when that isn't the case. When he transitioned onto his feet after flipping off his hands, he covered too much distance. It should be shorter than that.

Welp, courtesy brah? :P

Exilious wrote:The height of that flip was very unnatural. I mean, I like unnatural things (I'm unnatural myself XD) but that wasn't physically correct. Instead of going vertically, he should have gone waaaaay horizontally. By making him reach such a high altitude, you're informing us that all his forward momentum ceased at once, when that isn't the case. When he transitioned onto his feet after flipping off his hands, he covered too much distance. It should be shorter than that.

Welp, courtesy brah? :P

Umm.... which animation are you talking about?... specify please, because I have no Idea...

BeastalRage wrote:[

Umm.... which animation are you talking about?... specify please, because I have no Idea...

The one that you currently have as your signature.

Exilious wrote:

BeastalRage wrote:[

Umm.... which animation are you talking about?... specify please, because I have no Idea...

The one that you currently have as your signature.

Oh. Well it's supposed to be like that... And for me(considering the velocity and other factors) that jump looks legit.
Anyway it's an old animation, and I don't see point in fixing/editing it. Since it is not for entertaining(nor it was made for entertainment), but simply as training animation after reading tutorial.
The weirdest thing in it is that sword at the end in my opinion.

Long awaited update is here.(tho I dont think it is something exeptional)

Another Update :D
This time it is First phase of Black OP

This animation has a lot of awkward movements that don't flow together at all. When he kicks, his body shakes a bit, and the footplacement is off. And the part where the dude grabs the arm looks uneased completely. And the punch doesn't look straight but rather he punched with his arm curved up?