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Postby Shiftor » Sat Nov 15, 2014 9:01 am

SHIFTOR'S THREAD

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Work in progress. The run needs work, and I can't seem to get the landings just right.

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Edited out the trails on the punches, they looked silly. Trying to learn flow and stuff, also testing some effects. I butchered the walk, because walking is hard.


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Trying to work on fundamentals.


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^This was the first animation I was comfortable enough with to upload anywhere! I guess it's technically my 'first' one since the first few were absolute disasters.


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^Simple walking attempt. Before I knew anything about flow, I made this. Now it looks really weird to me.

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I have more animations, but I'm too lazy to upload them or they are just tests. ALSO, sorry about some of the dimensions. I'm still trying to decide on what dimensions are the best for me.
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Re: Shiftor's Thread

Postby Lord » Sat Nov 15, 2014 9:18 am

Nice to see someone with enthusiasm for Pivot,

Your animations are understandable, that's a good thing. You're movements are fluid and aren't stop and go, but you need to add more frames in between your movements.
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Re: Shiftor's Thread

Postby SuperNoob » Sat Nov 15, 2014 11:04 am

I see a lot of potential.
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Re: Shiftor's Thread

Postby Anton » Sat Nov 15, 2014 11:09 am

Your trails are not necessary. The punch trails on your new one looks wierd to me.

Some shakyness here and there, The torso movements are somewhat irregular, but else it looks good for a beginning.
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Re: Shiftor's Thread

Postby Shiftor » Sun Nov 16, 2014 3:06 am

Hey thanks for the feedback guys, I appreciate it! I've updated the post so there's some new stuff to look at if you so choose.
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