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Hey guys its Pop i tink im getting better

Postby Pop » Wed Nov 26, 2014 5:21 pm

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Re: Hey guys its Pop i tink im getting better

Postby Ray » Thu Nov 27, 2014 9:23 am

Its pretty shaky. He looks nervous to take the punch. I doubt you were even thinking of foot placement here so I wont say anything about that. The right arm needs to go to the other side of the body. When you punch, your other arm goes to your other side. This arm just stops right at his chest and then moves over. Also, after the impact of the punch make his arm recoil back the frame right after to show power.
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Re: Hey guys its Pop i tink im getting better

Postby Jojishi » Thu Nov 27, 2014 8:15 pm

Hey Pop, this animation was pretty good, but like Ray said it looked shaky. The general sense of speeding up and slowing down seemed fine, but in certain frames you must have spaced quite small in-between larger spacing in frames. Sort of like |-|---|------|-|-------|--|--------| where "|" is the frame and "-" is the spacing used. Try to keep it a little more consistent. The |-|--|---| is great though because you're using some easing (the speeding up/slowing down thing).

I guess that's about all the advice I can give. The actual punch had some great poses. The animation felt powerful as well. Just work on your spacing a little.
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Re: Hey guys its Pop i tink im getting better

Postby Pop » Fri Nov 28, 2014 8:32 am

Thanks guys i really needed that advice
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Re: Hey guys its Pop i tink im getting better

Postby Pop » Fri Nov 28, 2014 9:41 am

Thanks for the info
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