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Re: Madness' Projects - Master's Slash

PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2016 9:01 pm
by Jojishi
First off, I've got to say I like the stick-making and background stuff you're doing. Your colour palette always looks good as well.

For the newest one, there should have been some easing on the guy who slashed the sword down. You were going for a powerful attack, but it didn't work because after you put him in that final pose, you just stopped it there. It looks like he "appears" in that position now. Some easing beyond that pose would give a sense of momentum that it lacks currently, and while it would be powerful it wouldn't look stiff in a bad way like it is currently.

Your movements in your other animations seem fine but I think you definitely need to remember to ease in places.

Re: Madness' Projects - Master's Slash

PostPosted: Fri Apr 15, 2016 11:43 pm
by Madnessthunder
Alright I tried it again this time and redid the running to make it a bit more well timed, and added and modified a few frames to make the slash better and smoother. I'm used to just making shit up that doesn't look professional or martial artsy at all, so it seems kind of bizarre.

Re: Madness' Projects - Master's Slash

PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2016 7:59 pm
by Madnessthunder
Update. Made everything in here myself. 'Cept the guns & cape. I edited them to suit my liking, but I didn't create the originals.

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Re: Madness' Projects - Bullseye

PostPosted: Tue Apr 19, 2016 9:01 am
by Juke
Hey man I really liked it! Keep it up.

Re: Madness' Projects - Bullseye

PostPosted: Tue Apr 19, 2016 9:56 am
by Michi
figure looks nice but the actual movements need a lot of work.

Re: Madness' Projects - Bullseye

PostPosted: Mon Apr 25, 2016 5:47 pm
by Hitman
WOAH dude your really good,
that bullseye piv was sick but you do have some stiffness issues
try getting a little more fluid, but good job

Re: Madness' Projects - Bullseye

PostPosted: Tue Apr 26, 2016 5:48 am
by Setto
Not gonna lie those movments could use work. plus, the cape moved kinda wack, but i liked it

Re: Madness' Projects - Bullseye

PostPosted: Sun May 08, 2016 10:14 pm
by Madnessthunder
New Animation, Coin Toss.

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Re: Madness' Projects - Coin Toss

PostPosted: Mon May 09, 2016 12:32 am
by TθPS
nothin' much to say about, but the front leg is off, your movement are little stiff. nice animation tho, liked it

Re: Madness' Projects - Coin Toss

PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2016 6:51 pm
by Madnessthunder
Thanks Topsie, new anim

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Re: Madness' Projects - Coin Toss

PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2016 6:56 pm
by SIFTER
The other 3 fell at the same time which ceased the animation from looking so interesting. Make one figure fall after the other. I think what your issue is that you've animated them all at once. If this is the case, try to make use of the copy/paste feature. Concept was funny and put a smile on my face, so that's nice. Decent job, I'd say.

Re: Madness' Projects - Coin Toss

PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2016 7:12 pm
by Madnessthunder
Sifter wrote:The other 3 fell at the same time which ceased the animation from looking so interesting. Make one figure fall after the other. I think what your issue is that you've animated them all at once. If this is the case, try to make use of the copy/paste feature. Concept was funny and put a smile on my face, so that's nice. Decent job, I'd say.


I rather liked the fact they fell at the same time, so there's is the best you'll get
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Re: Madness' Projects - Instant Death

PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2016 7:29 pm
by Setto
lol amazing ghgh

Re: Madness' Projects - Instant Death

PostPosted: Wed May 11, 2016 7:50 pm
by SIFTER
That looks way better now.

Re: Madness' Projects - Instant Death

PostPosted: Mon May 16, 2016 6:55 pm
by Madnessthunder
New fullbody animation: Upwards Kick

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