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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - Stick figure Vs Wall

Postby Cressel » Thu Jun 04, 2015 10:38 pm

the wall movements were too quick the animation just looks rushed. Try to take more times and use more frames so all the movements are clear.
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - Stick figure Vs Wall

Postby TheLegendV » Fri Jun 05, 2015 5:09 am

So.... What do i need to work on?
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - Stick figure Vs Wall

Postby Anton » Fri Jun 05, 2015 5:19 am

The biggest issue I see here is the lack of length.

You need to learn how stack up frames on the same animation, for more than 1 day.
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - Stick figure Vs Wall

Postby TheLegendV » Fri Jun 05, 2015 9:00 am

Anton wrote:The biggest issue I see here is the lack of length.

You need to learn how stack up frames on the same animation, for more than 1 day.


Oh.... I see.. I'll animate something longer..
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - Stick figure Vs Wall

Postby Cressel » Sat Jun 06, 2015 12:18 am

TheLegendV wrote:So.... What do i need to work on?

Basically easing I suppose. You need to incorporate more frames onto your movements, as in use more frames to animate the punches, kicks, everything so that they are more clear, look smooth and well eased.
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - Stick figure Vs Wall

Postby TheLegendV » Mon Oct 26, 2015 3:37 am

Hi guys, I'm back after months of animating. So I have a very little thing that I just made.


Fight practice.

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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - SHOOORT fight practice

Postby PivotKnife » Tue Oct 27, 2015 1:15 am

Well with your latest animation that came out, the two punches looked like they were the same strength and speed, so I don't think the second punch could of made the guy fly out of the screen, but you're better than me so I guess I can't really judge you that well.
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - SHOOORT fight practice

Postby TheLegendV » Tue Oct 27, 2015 1:21 am

PivotKnife wrote:Well with your latest animation that came out, the two punches looked like they were the same strength and speed, so I don't think the second punch could of made the guy fly out of the screen, but you're better than me so I guess I can't really judge you that well.


Oh ok, I just wanted to end the animation quicly since i don't have any ideas left wat to do..
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - SHOOORT fight practice

Postby TheLegendV » Fri Apr 01, 2016 10:00 pm

So, hello guys, im back with tests once again, and i made an easing and spacing test right here

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Also made a punching stick practice thing.. im rusty

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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - SHOOORT fight practice

Postby TheLegendV » Fri Apr 01, 2016 10:34 pm

ump i need CnC ppl..
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - SHOOORT fight practice

Postby Alexis » Fri Apr 01, 2016 10:36 pm

TheLegendV wrote:So, hello guys, im back with tests once again, and i made an easing and spacing test right here

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Also made a punching stick practice thing.. im rusty

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Free Fall animation

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yeah, Cnc..


on the first animation, the front leg moves into the wall for no reason at all(dunno much about this, feel free to correct me lol) and the punch looked kinda weak and its buildup was wayy too fast imo,and also during the last few frames his back leg turns stiff along with his back(slightly)
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - SHOOORT fight practice

Postby TheLegendV » Fri Apr 01, 2016 10:41 pm

UnusAngelusAlatum wrote:
TheLegendV wrote:So, hello guys, im back with tests once again, and i made an easing and spacing test right here

Spoiler:
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Also made a punching stick practice thing.. im rusty

Spoiler:
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Free Fall animation

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yeah, Cnc..


on the first animation, the front leg moves into the wall for no reason at all(dunno much about this, feel free to correct me lol) and the punch looked kinda weak and its buildup was wayy too fast imo,and also during the last few frames his back leg turns stiff along with his back(slightly)


thx! the leg holds on to the wall then punches (corrected) any Cnc on the other anims?

edit: the punch was supposed to be weak, though
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - SHOOORT fight practice

Postby Alexis » Fri Apr 01, 2016 10:56 pm

TheLegendV wrote:
UnusAngelusAlatum wrote:
TheLegendV wrote:So, hello guys, im back with tests once again, and i made an easing and spacing test right here

Spoiler:
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Also made a punching stick practice thing.. im rusty

Spoiler:
Image


Free Fall animation

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yeah, Cnc..


on the first animation, the front leg moves into the wall for no reason at all(dunno much about this, feel free to correct me lol) and the punch looked kinda weak and its buildup was wayy too fast imo,and also during the last few frames his back leg turns stiff along with his back(slightly)


thx! the leg holds on to the wall then punches (corrected) any Cnc on the other anims?

edit: the punch was supposed to be weak, though


ok here we go, on the 2nd animation the two punch chain looks really nice and clear, but if you were to change the one frame punch into a much straighter arm then itd look more powerful, also the pose looks quite odd but the animation is pretty good overall, i dont really have anything to say about the free fall one, (P.S. since im still a beginner my cnc might not be as big or impacting as those who are higher.)
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - SHOOORT fight practice

Postby pivotanims25 » Sun Apr 03, 2016 6:10 am

Work on the footplacement, i'll be honest, the foot looks like is on ice so that is only when the floor is REALLY of ice ;D, just keep the foot on the same posistion.
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - SHOOORT fight practice

Postby Setto » Sun Apr 03, 2016 1:36 pm

TheLegendV wrote:So, hello guys, im back with tests once again, and i made an easing and spacing test right here

Spoiler:
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Also made a punching stick practice thing.. im rusty

Spoiler:
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Free Fall aniamtion

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yeah, Cnc..


The first one is ok, but it could be better. I don't really know why he went up to it like that, but the back leg and back were pretty stiff, and the punch didn't have much power to it. It was also kinda shaky to me. 2nd one wasn't bad, but his poses and balance were meh. It made the punch look weaker to me. .3.
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