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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - UPDATION!

Postby Franklin » Tue May 05, 2015 8:20 pm

I feel like there was a limited amount of movement in this animation, though what I did see was pretty decent, except for the reaction at the end. One thing I'd like to point out is the lack of floors, which is important because the figures seem to be floating instead of there being camera movement without it.
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - UPDATION!

Postby TheLegendV » Wed May 06, 2015 12:38 am

Root wrote:I feel like there was a limited amount of movement in this animation, though what I did see was pretty decent, except for the reaction at the end. One thing I'd like to point out is the lack of floors, which is important because the figures seem to be floating instead of there being camera movement without it.


Yeah, thanks for The CnC.. And I'm having trouble animating smooth reactions and that's why i did it like that in The end.
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - UPDATION!

Postby TheLegendV » Wed May 06, 2015 2:42 am

Update!

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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - UPDATION!

Postby Liteicon » Wed May 06, 2015 2:57 am

There's no problem on the reaction at all, it's on the ball. It should bounce vertically or lets say some degrees away after the ball hits the person.
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - UPDATION!

Postby TheLegendV » Wed May 06, 2015 6:04 am

Liteicon wrote:There's no problem on the reaction at all, it's on the ball. It should bounce vertically or lets say some degrees away after the ball hits the person.


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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - UPDATION!

Postby Anton » Wed May 06, 2015 6:46 am

I find the trajectory of the ball a little wierd.
That ball is very bouncy on the floor, but not bouncy at all when it hits the dude, looks like the ball is heavy in the beginning and very light in the end.

If this ball was a facehugger, that would change everything o_O
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - UPDATION!

Postby Madnessthunder » Wed May 06, 2015 2:09 pm

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Liteicon wrote:There's no problem on the reaction at all, it's on the ball. It should bounce vertically or lets say some degrees away after the ball hits the person.


Thanks! For ur cc..
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Personally, I feel like you slacked a bit. If he fell over, he wouldn't just hit the ground once. Its good that you got the leg right, but you need the torso and the rest to also do the same at different proportions to truly make it look nice and realistic. For example, the chest would move the least since its so close to the impact, and the further parts down would have more freedom to be affected by gravity.
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - UPDATION!

Postby TheLegendV » Thu May 07, 2015 12:33 am

Thanks for your CC everyone! :)
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - UPDATION!

Postby TheLegendV » Thu May 07, 2015 1:43 am

update update uPDAE^TEAUEHAUEa

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punch with no reactions :

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foot placement, easing and those other stuffs is kinda fixed@!
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - UPDATION!

Postby TheLegendV » Thu May 07, 2015 1:48 am

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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - UPDATION!

Postby Madnessthunder » Thu May 07, 2015 12:46 pm

TheLegendV wrote:update update uPDAE^TEAUEHAUEa

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punch with no reactions :

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foot placement, easing and those other stuffs is kinda fixed@!


Much better! Looks great man good job! The much was a bit too fast, but in general one of your best animations in my opinion.
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - UPDATION!

Postby Setto » Thu May 07, 2015 3:46 pm

the pose and way he punches (and his foot placement) Is WAY off. Although thats a huge improvement from what you used to be :)
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - UPDATION!

Postby TheLegendV » Thu May 07, 2015 8:24 pm

Thanks setto!
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - UPDATION!

Postby Setto » Fri May 08, 2015 4:56 pm

Your welcome. :3
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Re: TheLegendV's Thread - Sword test!

Postby TheLegendV » Sat May 09, 2015 1:29 am

UPDATE!

Sword test :

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( i know theres shakiness sorry..
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