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Re: Stanx's Thread

Postby Pulse » Wed Dec 17, 2014 5:29 pm

The overall quality was okayish. Animate more movements. I liked the combo, and you have awesome foot placement.
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Re: Stanx's Thread

Postby TheStanx13 » Wed Dec 17, 2014 10:17 pm

thanks! :D
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Re: Stanx's Thread

Postby Anton » Thu Dec 18, 2014 7:40 am

Ever tried low spacing, slower movements ?
I don't think you can achieve consequent progress if you only stick to heavy spacing and speed lines.
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Re: Stanx's Thread

Postby Caleb » Thu Dec 18, 2014 10:57 am

Anton wrote:Ever tried low spacing, slower movements ?
I don't think you can achieve consequent progress if you only stick to heavy spacing and speed lines.

What are you waiting for, there's really only one animation that is a bit too fast. The rest is just fine.


For now, I'm just going to suggest you keep animating and doing your thing. You'll become better over time.
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Re: Stanx's Thread

Postby Anton » Thu Dec 18, 2014 11:33 am

I mean, he's using speed lines for almost every move he makes.
Yes i'm exaggerating a little, but sometimes, these lines are not necessary at all.

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There's a big issue when the guy stops.

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I find this one cute in the beginning. Excellent timing, and nice show of power (and no speed lines (smile )
I like the use of easing when blackstick bows down before hitting, even though he broke his torso.
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Re: Stanx's Thread

Postby TheStanx13 » Thu Dec 18, 2014 12:40 pm

I like a lot speed effects... Sorry (:P

But thanks for the help!
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Re: Stanx's Thread

Postby TheStanx13 » Fri Dec 19, 2014 3:19 pm

New anim! Im practicing kicks :3
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Re: Stanx's Thread

Postby Anton » Fri Dec 19, 2014 3:28 pm

I hope you can master camera movements. This, plus fast paced stuff like you do will produce good results.

So if I understand well, you don't want to do this kind of movements, right ?

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Re: Stanx's Thread

Postby Madnessthunder » Fri Dec 19, 2014 3:50 pm

Anton wrote:I hope you can master camera movements. This, plus fast paced stuff like you do will produce good results.

So if I understand well, you don't want to do this kind of movements, right ?

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His head at the last few frames tho..
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Re: Stanx's Thread

Postby TheStanx13 » Fri Dec 19, 2014 7:04 pm

Anton wrote:I hope you can master camera movements. This, plus fast paced stuff like you do will produce good results.

So if I understand well, you don't want to do this kind of movements, right ?

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Nope, I like a lot fast combos and other things :p
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Re: Stanx's Thread

Postby TheStanx13 » Fri Dec 19, 2014 7:42 pm

New anim! I feel proud of this one, I don't know why lol

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