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Postby Darkphoenix » Tue Dec 23, 2014 11:09 am

Feedback please!!
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Re: Sneak

Postby socks » Tue Dec 23, 2014 11:14 am

Please stay to one topic to avoid clutter. Overall, just work on te easing and flow of the animation. That seems to be the most obvious flaw in the animation.
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Postby Darkphoenix » Tue Dec 23, 2014 11:18 am

What do u mean by clutter?
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Re: Sneak

Postby socks » Tue Dec 23, 2014 11:22 am

More than one topic per-person, Is a rather large DO NOT on the site.
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Postby Darkphoenix » Tue Dec 23, 2014 12:05 pm

Ok
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Re: Sneak

Postby TheLegendV » Tue Dec 23, 2014 9:58 pm

Ummm that black stick was shaky and your movements are kinda slow. So when i watch it its a bit boring ''_" . Also, you should work on 2D animations first before 3D or your animations will be much worse -_- BUT make more animations! i kinda like it!
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Re: Sneak

Postby Madnessthunder » Tue Dec 23, 2014 11:47 pm

Yea I agree with Legend. That timing was terrible, no offense. You should work on other stuff before you do things like this. Maybe sometime in the near future you'll be able to do this sorta stuff.
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Uuumm thanks Guys, I'll take the advice

Postby Darkphoenix » Wed Dec 24, 2014 1:37 am

I'll take the advice
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