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Postby Jojishi » Thu Feb 19, 2015 9:04 pm

This is a great animation! I wasn't expecting something of this quality actually. Movements were quite good for the most part and the full-bodies are great.

I think the only thing I could criticise was that certain things weren't clear. Was the guy who got stabbed at the beginning the one who transformed into the beast? Maybe you could have showed some scenes of him pulling out the sword and then crouching over as he begins to transform. You wouldn't even have to animate the transformation itself, but just imply it through the use of scenes and beginning of certain movements.

One other thing could be probably some more movement in scenes. The movements you had were good but it would be nice to see a little more fighting moves, because most of the animation is close ups and explosions. If you show more of the movements of this quality I can see you getting moved up to Intermediate. I think you're displaying some Intermediate qualities at the moment, but you're also making extremely enjoyable stuff with the full-bodies, close ups and effects. That is all really entertaining as well as the story and something I commend you for.
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Re: spers - kuraix-

Postby Ussay » Fri Feb 20, 2015 9:56 pm

I've already told you what I thought about this, but here with some more frames it got better towards the end (:
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Re: spers - kuraix-

Postby Cressel » Sun Feb 22, 2015 12:22 am

What bothers me the most comes from scene continuity. You end a scene in a fade out and the next scene has little continuity to the one before
Girl is running>fade out>she's standing the other way.

other than that kinda stuff the animation is really solid, really nice fullbodies and overall movements.
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Re: spers - kuraix-

Postby KURAIX » Mon Feb 23, 2015 7:00 pm

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Re: spers - kuraix-

Postby KURAIX » Mon Mar 02, 2015 7:58 pm

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Re: spers - kuraix-

Postby Anton » Mon Mar 02, 2015 8:39 pm

Get out of Begs hall.

like, right now.
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Re: spers - kuraix-

Postby Franklin » Mon Mar 02, 2015 8:53 pm

Why the hell are you still here?
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Re: spers - kuraix-

Postby KURAIX » Mon Mar 02, 2015 8:59 pm

I want to know that!
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Re: spers - kuraix-

Postby KURAIX » Sun Mar 29, 2015 2:56 pm

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Re: animation's - kuraix-

Postby KURAIX » Sun Apr 26, 2015 2:55 pm

updateeee
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Re: animation's - kuraix-

Postby Franklin » Sun Apr 26, 2015 2:59 pm

spoilers plz
seriously I can't even watch you animations at this point
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Re: animation's - kuraix-

Postby Yoh » Sun Apr 26, 2015 3:42 pm

His animations are amazing, beautiful fullbody 's
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Re: animation's - kuraix- UP

Postby KURAIX » Thu Jan 07, 2016 2:09 pm

1 update--

i am back :p
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Re: animation's - kuraix- UP

Postby Cloud~ » Thu Jan 07, 2016 2:40 pm

Love your anims, as i always do, im not ranker, but that look so nice, keep animating darxk
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Re: animation's - kuraix- UP

Postby Madnessthunder » Thu Jan 07, 2016 4:35 pm

Your stk making and BGs are nice but your movements still kinda blow, once you fix that idk why you'd still be in beginner anymore.
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