Re: spers - kuraix-
Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2015 9:04 pmThis is a great animation! I wasn't expecting something of this quality actually. Movements were quite good for the most part and the full-bodies are great.
I think the only thing I could criticise was that certain things weren't clear. Was the guy who got stabbed at the beginning the one who transformed into the beast? Maybe you could have showed some scenes of him pulling out the sword and then crouching over as he begins to transform. You wouldn't even have to animate the transformation itself, but just imply it through the use of scenes and beginning of certain movements.
One other thing could be probably some more movement in scenes. The movements you had were good but it would be nice to see a little more fighting moves, because most of the animation is close ups and explosions. If you show more of the movements of this quality I can see you getting moved up to Intermediate. I think you're displaying some Intermediate qualities at the moment, but you're also making extremely enjoyable stuff with the full-bodies, close ups and effects. That is all really entertaining as well as the story and something I commend you for.
I think the only thing I could criticise was that certain things weren't clear. Was the guy who got stabbed at the beginning the one who transformed into the beast? Maybe you could have showed some scenes of him pulling out the sword and then crouching over as he begins to transform. You wouldn't even have to animate the transformation itself, but just imply it through the use of scenes and beginning of certain movements.
One other thing could be probably some more movement in scenes. The movements you had were good but it would be nice to see a little more fighting moves, because most of the animation is close ups and explosions. If you show more of the movements of this quality I can see you getting moved up to Intermediate. I think you're displaying some Intermediate qualities at the moment, but you're also making extremely enjoyable stuff with the full-bodies, close ups and effects. That is all really entertaining as well as the story and something I commend you for.
