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dazh's sexy thread

Postby Dazh » Mon Jan 19, 2015 9:49 pm

here are some anims :D
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older stuff

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Re: dazh's sexy thread

Postby Madnessthunder » Mon Jan 19, 2015 10:14 pm

Work on making your movements less stiff.
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Re: dazh's sexy thread

Postby Dazh » Mon Jan 19, 2015 10:54 pm

MadnessThunder wrote:Work on making your movements less stiff.

Where was it stiff? (Except at the end or the gray stick)
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Re: dazh's sexy thread

Postby Mat » Mon Jan 19, 2015 11:37 pm

There was a frame of shakiness on the kick at the end. Apart from that the black stick movements were pretty good. I wish you didn't have the gray stick and that ending because it really makes the entire animation seem low quality.
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Re: dazh's sexy thread

Postby Will » Tue Jan 20, 2015 3:22 am

Mat wrote:There was a frame of shakiness on the kick at the end. Apart from that the black stick movements were pretty good. I wish you didn't have the gray stick and that ending because it really makes the entire animation seem low quality.


Yep.

There were some slight foot placement issues with the black stick, but overall the actual movements are fairly solid. This would have been considerably better without the grey stick and that ending. Your animation thread should kind of be a portfolio of you best/favourite animations. Perhaps this animation should have been posted in freestyle instead?
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Re: dazh's sexy thread

Postby Dazh » Wed Jan 21, 2015 8:48 pm

Will wrote:
Mat wrote:There was a frame of shakiness on the kick at the end. Apart from that the black stick movements were pretty good. I wish you didn't have the gray stick and that ending because it really makes the entire animation seem low quality.


Yep.

There were some slight foot placement issues with the black stick, but overall the actual movements are fairly solid. This would have been considerably better without the grey stick and that ending. Your animation thread should kind of be a portfolio of you best/favourite animations. Perhaps this animation should have been posted in freestyle instead?

I agree
Ill upload better and more serious anims :)
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Re: dazh's sexy thread

Postby Dazh » Sat Jan 24, 2015 10:00 pm

Update! :D
stretchy arms and things
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Re: dazh's sexy thread

Postby Franklin » Sat Jan 24, 2015 10:19 pm

Do you mean that your cousin made that animation? Or did they just make the base?
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Re: dazh's sexy thread

Postby Dazh » Sun Jan 25, 2015 1:39 am

Root wrote:Do you mean that your cousin made that animation? Or did they just make the base?

He animated the gray stick only
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Re: dazh's sexy thread

Postby Dazh » Sun Jan 25, 2015 5:19 pm

Update!
With a few tutorials I made a sig stick and used him in this anim
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Re: dazh's sexy thread

Postby Madnessthunder » Sun Jan 25, 2015 5:22 pm

Looks dope.
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Re: dazh's sexy thread

Postby Dazh » Sun Jan 25, 2015 5:36 pm

MadnessThunder wrote:Looks dope.

thanks :D
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Re: dazh's sexy thread

Postby Mori » Sun Jan 25, 2015 5:37 pm

Nice animation man.
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Re: dazh's sexy thread

Postby Franklin » Sun Jan 25, 2015 5:41 pm

Now we're getting somewhere! Its nice to see you make a serious animation.
Looks great; my main complaint would probably be that it is hard to tell what is going on with those strange flashes, especially when the default stick attacks the green one.
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Re: dazh's sexy thread

Postby Sharpshooter » Mon Jan 26, 2015 6:12 am

That first green flicker/flash effect turned out well in your newest animation. Looks good man. Also the smooth camera movements were a nice touch

How long have you been animating for? I see too much potential in you
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