TheDarkDemon

here are some anims :D

Work on making your movements less stiff.

MadnessThunder wrote:Work on making your movements less stiff.

Where was it stiff? (Except at the end or the gray stick)

There was a frame of shakiness on the kick at the end. Apart from that the black stick movements were pretty good. I wish you didn't have the gray stick and that ending because it really makes the entire animation seem low quality.

Mat wrote:There was a frame of shakiness on the kick at the end. Apart from that the black stick movements were pretty good. I wish you didn't have the gray stick and that ending because it really makes the entire animation seem low quality.

Yep.

There were some slight foot placement issues with the black stick, but overall the actual movements are fairly solid. This would have been considerably better without the grey stick and that ending. Your animation thread should kind of be a portfolio of you best/favourite animations. Perhaps this animation should have been posted in freestyle instead?

Will wrote:

Mat wrote:There was a frame of shakiness on the kick at the end. Apart from that the black stick movements were pretty good. I wish you didn't have the gray stick and that ending because it really makes the entire animation seem low quality.

Yep.

There were some slight foot placement issues with the black stick, but overall the actual movements are fairly solid. This would have been considerably better without the grey stick and that ending. Your animation thread should kind of be a portfolio of you best/favourite animations. Perhaps this animation should have been posted in freestyle instead?

I agree
Ill upload better and more serious anims :)

Update! :D
stretchy arms and things

Do you mean that your cousin made that animation? Or did they just make the base?

Root wrote:Do you mean that your cousin made that animation? Or did they just make the base?

He animated the gray stick only

Update!
With a few tutorials I made a sig stick and used him in this anim
Enjoy

Looks dope.

MadnessThunder wrote:Looks dope.

thanks :D

Nice animation man.

Now we're getting somewhere! Its nice to see you make a serious animation.
Looks great; my main complaint would probably be that it is hard to tell what is going on with those strange flashes, especially when the default stick attacks the green one.

That first green flicker/flash effect turned out well in your newest animation. Looks good man. Also the smooth camera movements were a nice touch

How long have you been animating for? I see too much potential in you