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Hey Dark Demons

Postby Lunar_Eclipse » Mon Feb 09, 2015 4:22 pm

Hey guys! Check out one of my first attempts at a combo
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Re: Hey Dark Demons

Postby Aron » Mon Feb 09, 2015 4:52 pm

Looks like they're slipping on ice.
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Re: Hey Dark Demons

Postby Daniël » Mon Feb 09, 2015 7:23 pm

When you animate the legs, try to position the feet in the exact same position as the previous frame, unless the foot is actually lifted from the ground. The slipping makes the the animation look kinda awkward.
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Re: Hey Dark Demons

Postby Ipman » Tue Feb 10, 2015 9:18 pm

And he Doesn't have enough force to push him back ward.. It looks like he's just slapping him, try making the body move on each frame to make it more smooth
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Re: Hey Dark Demons

Postby Anton » Wed Feb 11, 2015 4:21 am

Well, if we put aside the slippery ground and the small-but-disturbing shakyness, there is still some things to improve.

-Power : the stickman who punches has a very static torso when he hits. Try swinging your arm back and forth with force and you'll notice that your torso will follow a little.

-Stiffness : maybe you were aiming for realistic positions, but starting from that, it's hard to control the tiny little movements that makes something realistic.
Here, the movements aren't dynamic enough due to stiffness. Try to push the limits of the articulations, and you'll have more control on your movements.

Something good about this animation ? Reactions/Feedback, in my opinion.
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Re: Hey Dark Demons

Postby Lunar_Eclipse » Fri Feb 13, 2015 5:25 pm

Thanks guys, as always you've helped me a lot :D
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