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Re: Gouenji's Thread ! - UPDATE Better at Acrobatics !

Postby Gouenji32 » Fri Jul 31, 2015 9:36 am

Animated at 20 fps ! UPDATE Acrobatics test :)
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Re: Gouenji's Thread ! - UPDATE Better at Acrobatics !

Postby Franklin » Fri Jul 31, 2015 10:44 am

Try editing it to make the momentum a bit more consistent, as well as using flow to help him change direction. Nice job with the arms, though.
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Re: Gouenji's Thread ! - UPDATE Better at Acrobatics !

Postby Gary » Fri Jul 31, 2015 8:23 pm

It looked p decent. You should try to make it so that when he flips, the center of mass is in the correct area (about where his gut/abdomen is), and have him spin on that point. Also, you should probably add a bit more anticipation to the flips and jumps so they're more clear.
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Re: Gouenji's Thread ! - UPDATE Better at Acrobatics !

Postby Gouenji32 » Sat Aug 15, 2015 1:11 pm

Thx dude i'll apply it on the next animation ! :)
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Re: Gouenji's Thread ! - UPDATE Breaking rust !

Postby Gouenji32 » Wed Aug 26, 2015 5:59 am

Hey guys wassup... here a new anim since i'm breaking rust...
The next anim will be a project i'm working on ...
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Re: Gouenji's Thread ! - UPDATE Breaking rust !

Postby Mori » Thu Aug 27, 2015 2:53 am

Nice animation bro!
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Re: Gouenji's Thread ! - UPDATE Awesome Acrobatics !

Postby Gouenji32 » Fri Aug 28, 2015 7:06 am

Thx Mori !!
Here a new update ona crobatics GUYS!
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Re: Gouenji's Thread ! - UPDATE Awesome Acrobatics !

Postby Gouenji32 » Sat Nov 28, 2015 4:30 pm

I''ll Update my thread soon... Probably in 1week :)
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Re: Gouenji's Thread ! - UPDATE Awesome Acrobatics !

Postby Ray » Sat Nov 28, 2015 4:58 pm

ou've got good taste in animators you get your ideas from. this was pretty good too, You're getting better
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Re: Gouenji's Thread ! - UPDATE Awesome Acrobatics !

Postby Raymond » Sat Nov 28, 2015 6:24 pm

Those backhand springs are perfect, but the beginning is a little floaty. Seriously though, I've made a lot of back handsprings and yours look great to me. For next time I would suggest using a stick figure that has hands. They don't have to be detailed hands, they can look just like his feet, but it will show more stability when his hands make impact with the ground.

I actually just went back through your animations and I don't remember seeing any of them. I must have glanced past your thread, I'm sorry dude. You've made some really nice animations recently though. If I were to pick out something you should work on, I would say defining your key poses. A couple of them are in some awkward positions, but that's the main issue I'm seeing. Work on that and you'll probably get moved up soon.
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Re: Gouenji's Thread ! - UPDATE Awesome Acrobatics !

Postby Jack » Sat Nov 28, 2015 6:26 pm

After the first time he lands, he should bend his legs a little to anticipate for the second jump.
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Re: Gouenji's Thread ! - UPDATE Awesome Acrobatics !

Postby Math » Sat Nov 28, 2015 6:36 pm

Cool,but it needs more build up before the second jump in my opinion.
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Re: Gouenji's Thread ! - UPDATE Awesome Acrobatics !

Postby Gouenji32 » Sun Nov 29, 2015 4:11 am

Raymond wrote:Those backhand springs are perfect, but the beginning is a little floaty. Seriously though, I've made a lot of back handsprings and yours look great to me. For next time I would suggest using a stick figure that has hands. They don't have to be detailed hands, they can look just like his feet, but it will show more stability when his hands make impact with the ground.

I actually just went back through your animations and I don't remember seeing any of them. I must have glanced past your thread, I'm sorry dude. You've made some really nice animations recently though. If I were to pick out something you should work on, I would say defining your key poses. A couple of them are in some awkward positions, but that's the main issue I'm seeing. Work on that and you'll probably get moved up soon.

Thanks for your advices and your support Raymond !
Ocean: I'll try to apply that ^^
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Re: Gouenji's Thread ! - UPDATE Awesome Acrobatics !

Postby Aldiar Aldiar » Sun Nov 29, 2015 2:24 pm

Nice nice!...very nice animations!
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Re: Gouenji's Thread ! - UPDATE Awesome Acrobatics !

Postby mounsne » Tue May 03, 2016 1:35 pm

u are good also change G.M, I'M THE ONLY G.M HERE!but anywas .. that was cool ^^
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