Yet another combo!

[Lunar_Eclipse]

Whaddya think?

[Gouenji32]

First of all your foot placement is off, and this anim is not that bad :)
You should work on the basics(stiffness,foot placement...)
Go look some tutorials,there are some here and on on youtube!
Keep animating !

[TheXper]

goujenji is right, footplacement is very importent.
it looks like u work segment per segment, try to move every red dot per frame.
ur anim is shaky to try to animate like this

|.|..|...|....|.....|......|.....|....|...|..|.|
and not
|.|...|.....|..|.....|..|.....|.......|..|....|...|

keep it even
try animate a bal move like the first lines.
if it work then try it with a stick and so further
keep it up!

[Anton]

You should use the BBcode [/code] to show spacing right Xper, because without, 2 or more spaces are cut to one space.
Oh, nice edit... nevermind

Anyway :

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Shaky spacing :
O---O-O--O-O---------O--O

Constant spacing :
O---O---O---O---O---O---O

Eased spacing :
O-O--O---O-----O--------O

Read some spacing tutorials, or watch and analyse Vets/Elite animations.

[SupaPig]

Overall, not bad, you just need to work more on easing, the stiffness, and try not to do too many visual effects, and focus more on making the movement smooth, so keep on working, and take your time (ahem Anton :))!