BBoDDV Update

[Eli2814]

What better way to show how SUPER excited I am for BBoDDV than to make an entry involving SUPER heroes!?
BBoDDV: 205 frames


Edit of Peter Bone's Domino
http://postimg.org/image/3kla670jz/

Reluctant Wake-up
http://postimg.org/image/z8n5d4n91/

Danny Phantom
http://postimg.org/image/kep4vxhjd/

Kirby in Training Mode
http://postimg.org/image/9ifbo3bx7/

Green Lantern Vs. Sinestro Corps Soldier
http://postimg.org/image/4xbfv4oo5/

Chosen by the Ring
http://postimg.org/image/q7v0w3syf/

Worm Adventure
http://postimg.org/image/mclnzd9sx/

[Anton]

The rank is in the likes of Med-High beginner.

However, the creativity in these 3 (especialy the worm one) is EXCEPTIONNAL !!
I loved so much that story, and how it ended.

[Coweetie]

Really love our creativity, and that you use colors! That worm adventure was really entertaining, the way you animated the crawling was hilarious. I was a bit sad at the ending haha :D Never saw someone animating a worm haha :D


You got the basic moves down, I hope you do more funny entertaining stuff like this!

[Raymond]

These are so entertaining! Your very creative. I've never seen a worm animated in pivot. He went through some tough shit, that poor little guy. In the beginning when the bird is carrying him, I would keep the bird in front of the clouds, it looks weird when he goes behind them because to us that indicates that bird is bigger than the cloud, which is not normal. Most clouds are huge, so keep that in mind next time.

That's the only weird thing I can spot. The other 2 are pretty funny. I like how a guy watching tv gets a magical ring that takes him beyond his universe. That guy is soaring to new heights right now haha.

The fight is awesome. Green lantern is a boss! I specifically like how you displayed them carrying boulders with the power of the ring by putting bubbles around the debris they picked up. It's cool how you made the rocks spin while in the bubbles, it made the animation a lot more dynamic. Your pretty good at demonstrating the shifting of their weight while floating in air too.

I think your pretty good dude, keep up the originality.

[Gouenji32]

You have a large creativity ! Welcomes on the forum man. I love the fight of the green lantern and the yellow one and the worm animation is so funny especially the end! And your backgrounds seems good ! Keep up the job !

[Eli2814]

I made a new one! I love SSB, so this probably won't be the last of these types of anims

http://postimg.org/image/9ifbo3bx7/

[Franklin]

I like that you tried to apply squash and stretch, but remember that the thing that you are morphing always retains the same volume. The animation as a whole looks pretty good, though; hard to criticize animation-wise due to the obvious arcade style. Good job.

[Eli2814]

I like that you tried to apply squash and stretch, but remember that the thing that you are morphing always retains the same volume.

I see what you mean, I didn't think about that. Thanks man!

[Anton]

Actually, given Kirby's spritesheet, he doesn't really keep the same volume when he ducks.
But he needs to be at least slightly wider when he swallows.

[Eli2814]

Thanks, Anton. I'm gonna try to apply those changes and see what happens. Until then, here's a little Danny Phantom

http://postimg.org/image/kep4vxhjd/

[Lord]

Ooooooooh, Danny Phantom, used to love em'. (no homo inteneded)

Your animations do seem creative, but you just need to keep working on those basics, I'd suggest doing some tests first. ;)

[Eli2814]

I'd suggest doing some tests first. ;)

Which are the basics that I need to improve on the most?

[Lord]

Go over easing, some parts of the animation had it, but some didn't.
Smoothess is one thing too.
Keep at it. :)

[Eli2814]

Ok, let's see what you think of the easing on this one
http://postimg.org/image/z8n5d4n91/

[Coweetie]

standing up from bed is in my opinion one of the most difficult things to do (expecially when it should look realistic), I thought the easing looks alright :) do you continue this?