^ EDIT : there should be a post with some animations up there ^
You have a lot of cool ideas, I really like that. But you haven't figured out the basics of a good-looking animation yet.
You make the mistakes that most of the newcomers make, and that's totally normal.
Easing and smoothness, flow, foot placement, camera movement, cinematic transitions...
I suggest you should look at the tutorial section for knowing about these terms.
rank : Medium-Beginner