My thread :v

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My thread :v

Postby Clies » Sat Sep 05, 2015 12:35 am

Welcome to my thread


B0X0R entry


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Current projects:


One Piece


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DBZ

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Megaman Zero

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Finished

Duelist Intro

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Some fullbodies



Old stuff:


Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
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One Piece
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DBZ
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Stick Fights
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Megaman Animations
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As you can see there is some animations with a "PXA" that was my old nickname.

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Started animating : somewhere around 2011 lol

Intermediate: 4/8/2016
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Re: My thread :v

Postby Cheese » Sat Sep 05, 2015 1:41 am

Everything's a bit too teleport-y and there's alot of flashes,(frames that are completely black or white) any any movements there are last for about 3 frames, I'd like to see some real movements before I judge your skill level.
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Postby Cressel » Sat Sep 05, 2015 1:49 am

Really nice aesthetics on your animations, but your movements are extremely rushed and that lowers the quality a lot. Use more frames, make your movements clean.
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Re: My thread :v

Postby Mori » Sat Sep 05, 2015 2:28 am

You have super Fullbodies Bro.

Also you have a style like XMG, which I like it.
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Re: My thread :v

Postby /moe » Sat Sep 05, 2015 8:57 am

Holy shit you're very talented at stickmaking. Movements look rushed tho.
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Re: My thread :v

Postby Kermit » Sat Sep 05, 2015 9:38 am

Love it, the movements could be better but easily inter material.
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Re: My thread :v

Postby Monkey.D » Sat Sep 05, 2015 6:04 pm

Great one piece anim ;)
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Re: My thread :v

Postby Extra » Sun Sep 06, 2015 1:07 pm

I like that you use colors.
Actual fucking colors on everything.
Not just black and white.
I like it.
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Re: My thread :v

Postby Cavolia » Sun Sep 06, 2015 2:24 pm

You have a really enjoyable style. Very flashy and a lot going on, makes me want to watch everything at least a couple of times.
Take your time with movements though, like most people point out. You're animating fast to the point that things become a blur, the fact that your key poses are readable is saving you right now but I think you can get a lot more out of your animations.
Effects and look are totally spot on though (thumbsup
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Re: My thread :v

Postby Krabcake » Sun Sep 06, 2015 5:23 pm

The One Pece one is my favorite, you really nailed its animation style, with its long stretches and snaps, One thing I would say is try more on focusing fights on the ground, and try not to make the fights so flasy and cinematic. You don't want a case of style over substance
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Re: My thread :v

Postby Madnessthunder » Sun Sep 06, 2015 7:12 pm

Insanely awesome stick making, but bad usage of flashy effects that take up the entire screen. Makes it hard to follow whats happening, especially in the One Piece animation.
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Re: My thread :v

Postby Clies » Tue Sep 08, 2015 4:30 pm

Update guys :D

New version of my DBZ anim http://i.imgur.com/Wj1TwrR.gifv

I tried to not rush with the movements and put less flashes
What do you guys think?

I also uploaded my old animations.
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Re: My thread :v

Postby Madnessthunder » Tue Sep 08, 2015 6:02 pm

Clies wrote:Update guys :D

New version of my DBZ anim http://i.imgur.com/Wj1TwrR.gifv

I tried to not rush with the movements and put less flashes
What do you think?

I also uploaded my old animations.

That looks fucking amazing someone give this guy inters already
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Re: My thread :v

Postby Mike » Wed Sep 09, 2015 10:24 am

Your animation skills are but a fraction of your stickmaking skills. If you want to improve i suggest you should spend more time to practice movements without any distracting flashy effects.
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Spoiler:
Frank Thomas and Ollie Johnston - The Illusion of Life: Disney Animation
https://vk.com/doc-58650815_254012664?dl=c753708760f72ab566
Richard Williams - The Animator's Survival Kit:
https://vk.com/doc176415392_222242886?hash=5e3a8f0a7cbfa92e91&dl=bc6e3d465d2f9e012c
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12 Principles of Animation summarized
http://vimeo.com/93206523
Aaron Hartline and Victor Navone, animators at Pixar Animation Studios and mentors at Animation Mentor, discuss timing and spacing tips and tricks
http://www.animationmentor.com/resources/webinars/timing-and-spacing/
Pixar's 22 rules to phenomenal storytelling
http://imgur.com/gallery/E8xe0

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Re: My thread :v

Postby Gouenji32 » Fri Sep 11, 2015 3:26 pm

DAMN!!!! Dude that's freaking awesome what you make!!! Your stickmaking are just so incredible and your style really like (One piece and DBZ *_*) Plz continue what you do ;) !
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