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Re: Lp9's Animations

Postby lp9 » Tue Dec 29, 2015 4:52 pm

3d walk and punch

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Re: Lp9's Animations

Postby Mandrake » Tue Dec 29, 2015 5:25 pm

The walk is not bad at all, looks nice, but at the punch part, it looked shaky and slow, so it looked weak. Try not to shake stuff next time, go with a flow.
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Re: Lp9's Animations

Postby Raymond » Tue Dec 29, 2015 5:25 pm

I've got to give you credit for trying 3D like that. Most beginners steer clear of 3D, but you are embracing it. Just watch the proportions. The bend in his legs which represent his knee get lower and lower on his leg as he gets closer to the screen, which makes him look somewhat deformed. Keep up the good work though, if you keep making 3D animations like this, you'll just keep getting better.
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Re: Lp9's Animations

Postby lp9 » Wed Dec 30, 2015 12:45 pm

combo test 2

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I tried my best with the idle stance
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Re: Lp9's Animations

Postby Mandrake » Wed Dec 30, 2015 1:25 pm

It looks nice, it really does, the kick doesn't feel that strong, but the punches are pretty good. About the idle stances, it's really well done, but it would be a million times better if you fixed the feet, you're getting better man, keep it up :)
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Re: Lp9's Animations

Postby lp9 » Wed Dec 30, 2015 1:34 pm

Mandrake wrote:It looks nice, it really does, the kick doesn't feel that strong, but the punches are pretty good. About the idle stances, it's really well done, but it would be a million times better if you fixed the feet, you're getting better man, keep it up :)


Thanks, but those feet are hard to keep still lol, sometimes i don't even notice that they move accidentaly and this happens
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Re: Lp9's Animations

Postby lp9 » Sat Jan 02, 2016 12:30 pm

Update! this one took a lot of effort to do.

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Re: Lp9's Animations

Postby _Chris » Sat Jan 02, 2016 1:23 pm

really nice effects, but you need to keep working on your movements, they are a bit shaky at times and especially the poses are not really dynamic.
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Re: Lp9's Animations / Psychic vs Stickman

Postby Jack » Sat Jan 02, 2016 3:55 pm

The idle movements in your combo test don't loop very well. Otherwise those animations look pretty nice, a bit shaky but that'll fix itself.
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Re: Lp9's Animations / Psychic vs Stickman

Postby Madnessthunder » Wed Jan 06, 2016 6:55 am

Your animations and effects are always pretty cool, you just lack mastering of the basics. Your effects are high beginner obviously, but your movements are like medium/low still and take from the animations, but you are improving.
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Re: Lp9's Animations / Psychic vs Stickman

Postby lp9 » Fri Oct 07, 2016 9:22 am

I have been inactive for quite some time....


Well, nevermind that, here's some simple effects, i'll try to animate some actual movement next.

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Re: Lp9's Animations / Simple effects

Postby Cavolia » Fri Oct 07, 2016 10:56 am

Reminds me of oblivion fall's animation. Very impressive effects in my opinion.
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Re: Lp9's Animations / Simple effects

Postby Crono » Fri Oct 07, 2016 12:17 pm

Fire effects, man. Seriously, they look slick! Everything is well animated.
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Re: Lp9's Animations / Simple effects

Postby Finom » Fri Oct 07, 2016 3:44 pm

Simple effects my ass, that's awesome. I couldn't even zoom a camera back, and you're pulling this shit on us. I love it (thumbsup
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Re: Lp9's Animations / Simple effects

Postby herricane45 » Fri Oct 07, 2016 5:43 pm

Holy crap! That looks freaking sick dude! Good job dude!
I wouldnt pull that off. Specially the first flash. Have no clue how I would reproduce it.
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