[UPDATE 11/5/2017] Jack's Thread

Start your journey with Pivot here.

Moderator: Rank Team

Rank?

-
0
No votes
Medium Beginner
10
56%
High Beginner
6
33%
Borderline Intermediates
2
11%
+
0
No votes
 
Total votes : 18

[UPDATE 11/5/2017] Jack's Thread

Postby Jack » Fri Nov 27, 2015 12:03 pm

My Thread

I think I'm actually improving (probably not)

Image
thanks to Gifgiff for a lot of help!

not really new
Spoiler:
Image

Old shit
Spoiler:
Thanks waffles <3
Image
Had some fun with this one.
Image
Tried a bouncy stye.
Image
Might finish this.
Image
BG+Kick+Idling+Shakiness+Blademaster's base=whatever the hell this is.
Image
Gifraped Spartan emotion thing.
Image
Preview of a joint with Ichamaru.
Image
Small combo with Lithium's base.
Image
No double framing:
Image

Criticism welcome and appreciated!
Credits: Blademaster, Lithium, Daniel, Cressel, Droidz, Sharpshooter, Flame, Valtus, Marvilicious, Krustalien
Last edited by Jack on Sun Nov 05, 2017 2:18 pm, edited 19 times in total.
JackOffline
リラックス
リラックス
User avatar
 
Posts: 617
Joined: Mon Nov 02, 2015 8:47 pm
Location: U.S.

Re: Small Combo [Jack's Thread]

Postby Madnessthunder » Sun Nov 29, 2015 7:09 pm

Looks better without the double framing imo. Foot placement is good, it's smooth, seems to be like a pretty solid animation. You should post more though.
Image

Hey check out my shitty animations
Thread.
MadnessthunderOffline
Professional
Professional
User avatar
 
Posts: 414
Joined: Mon Dec 08, 2014 2:42 pm
Location: Georgia

Re: A Couple Things [Jack's Thread]

Postby Jack » Sat Dec 05, 2015 12:32 pm

I added things.
JackOffline
リラックス
リラックス
User avatar
 
Posts: 617
Joined: Mon Nov 02, 2015 8:47 pm
Location: U.S.

Re: A Couple Things [Jack's Thread]

Postby .paperv » Sat Dec 05, 2015 6:41 pm

I like the physic of that two guys get killed, only things that bad is. The fps, the gif raped it. And also the joint with Ichamaru was pretty cool, keep it up man!
.papervOffline
VIP
 
Posts: 768
Joined: Sat Sep 05, 2015 5:41 am

Re: updoot [Jack's Thread]

Postby Jack » Sun Dec 06, 2015 8:56 am

i shat something out
JackOffline
リラックス
リラックス
User avatar
 
Posts: 617
Joined: Mon Nov 02, 2015 8:47 pm
Location: U.S.

Re: updoot [Jack's Thread]

Postby Madnessthunder » Sun Dec 06, 2015 4:18 pm

From what I can see, they're still pretty choppy. The blade master one needs to be eased more. You have the rest down imo, just work on easing and flowing your moves together more. A little stiff in some departments as well.
Image

Hey check out my shitty animations
Thread.
MadnessthunderOffline
Professional
Professional
User avatar
 
Posts: 414
Joined: Mon Dec 08, 2014 2:42 pm
Location: Georgia

Re: updoot [Jack's Thread]

Postby Jack » Fri Dec 18, 2015 6:55 pm

ta-daaa!
laziness!
JackOffline
リラックス
リラックス
User avatar
 
Posts: 617
Joined: Mon Nov 02, 2015 8:47 pm
Location: U.S.

Re: updoot [Jack's Thread]

Postby .paperv » Fri Dec 18, 2015 8:36 pm

I don't know why laziness turns into a great animation lol, there's nothing much I can critic because it's too short. All you have to do is only fix the hand shakiness and the foot placement, try to check frame to frame and fix the things that doesn't suitable to the orion skin. Otherwise it's nice I like it, keep it up!
.papervOffline
VIP
 
Posts: 768
Joined: Sat Sep 05, 2015 5:41 am

Re: bouncy? no [Jack's Thread]

Postby Jack » Sun Dec 20, 2015 9:24 am

I tried a bouncy style.
JackOffline
リラックス
リラックス
User avatar
 
Posts: 617
Joined: Mon Nov 02, 2015 8:47 pm
Location: U.S.

Re: i can't parkour help [Jack's Thread]

Postby Jack » Sat Jan 16, 2016 8:30 am

abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz
JackOffline
リラックス
リラックス
User avatar
 
Posts: 617
Joined: Mon Nov 02, 2015 8:47 pm
Location: U.S.

Re: i can't parkour help [Jack's Thread]

Postby .paperv » Sat Jan 16, 2016 9:10 am

Looks neat. But try to make the movement bit smoother. Or you can just decrease the fps if it's more appropriate with a lower fps.
.papervOffline
VIP
 
Posts: 768
Joined: Sat Sep 05, 2015 5:41 am

Re: i can't parkour help [Jack's Thread]

Postby Massive Legend » Sat Jan 16, 2016 12:06 pm

he goes out of the screen wayyyy too fast the first time
Massive LegendOnline
VIP
User avatar
 
Posts: 939
Joined: Sun Mar 15, 2015 5:58 pm
Location: ͠° ل͜ °

Re: i can't parkour help [Jack's Thread]

Postby Madnessthunder » Sat Jan 16, 2016 3:31 pm

Your easing is way off dawg, there pretty much is none.
Image

Hey check out my shitty animations
Thread.
MadnessthunderOffline
Professional
Professional
User avatar
 
Posts: 414
Joined: Mon Dec 08, 2014 2:42 pm
Location: Georgia

Re: i can't parkour help [Jack's Thread]

Postby Jack » Sat Feb 13, 2016 9:10 pm

update, ft. arms shakier than a fault line.
JackOffline
リラックス
リラックス
User avatar
 
Posts: 617
Joined: Mon Nov 02, 2015 8:47 pm
Location: U.S.

Re: i can't parkour help [Jack's Thread]

Postby Massive Legend » Sat Feb 13, 2016 11:20 pm

the reaction after he hits it on the floor is all wrong, he wouldn't be able to go back like that with that much momentum going forward
Massive LegendOnline
VIP
User avatar
 
Posts: 939
Joined: Sun Mar 15, 2015 5:58 pm
Location: ͠° ل͜ °

Next

Return to Pivot Beginners Hall

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: Bing [Bot], Google [Bot], Nemesis-YT and 6 guests