MrMushroom's Thread

[Echo]

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Don't just resize the stick, actually make new sticks to make it seem like his arms or legs are closer or further away for more 3D-ish look,if you do this your animation will looks sick af as the kids say.

Really like it otherwise except the ending wtf he just falls down like a brick, keep it up !

[MrMushroom]

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[Echo]

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I really like this animation, it's really simple but it's executed really well, there are some thing that I didn't like tho.
Spacing got all messed up when he threw the snowball, also you resize sticks too much(in my opinion), it's not too big of a deal but it would look better and less lazy if you made new sticks for arms/legs/head... rather than just resizing them.
That's pretty much everything I didn't like, If you keep improving like this you will be a very good animator.

Keep it up !

[MrMushroom]

Thanks for cc, i'll parctise

[Blademaster]

that was a nice animation dude.

[MrMushroom]

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[MrZenox]

Nice! there is a good anticipation for the jump and physic is great! keep it up :D

[Echo]

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What's up with that dabbing pose man in your animations, is it intentional ?
The jump looked pretty weak, you can fix that by making him look less stiff, it just looks like his back barely bends. Other than this is really well executed, I'm looking forward to your next animations.

Close to borderline Intermediate

[MrMushroom]

Yup, that pose was intentional. Thanks :)

[Jojishi]

Echo's right about the anticipation before the jump. Also, he could have swung his arms behind him in anticipation, which would give more inertia when he swings them out in front. Everything else looks very good to me! Your poses, spacing, flow, physics... All looks Inters to me (or ridiculously close, maybe I'm just soft these days).

Keep at it and I'm sure you'll get moved up in the future. :)