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Re: [Riott] 3D

Postby para nimo » Fri Sep 23, 2016 4:59 pm

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I got bored so I made this in about 20-30 minutes. Most of it consisted of a dude in the middle but i messed something up so I ended up deleting him.
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Re: [Riott] 3D

Postby Fuel » Fri Sep 23, 2016 5:36 pm

That looks pretty cool Riott, would be awesome to use in the middle of a fight :)
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Re: [Riott] 3D

Postby para nimo » Sat Sep 24, 2016 5:11 am

Fuel wrote:That looks pretty cool Riott, would be awesome to use in the middle of a fight :)

Thanks, fuel. Means a lot coming from you! I was thinking of using this but I didn't think it would be good enough. It's my first time trying this. :D
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Re: [Riott] 3D

Postby Fuel » Sat Sep 24, 2016 3:15 pm

Haha no problem, keep experimenting with it, work on the movement patterns and proportions and you will get some cool results. P.S. Your DDC entry is looking awesome so far, keep going! :D
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Re: [Riott] 3D

Postby para nimo » Sun Sep 25, 2016 7:03 am

Thanks ^-^
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Re: [Riott] 3D

Postby dilz9015 » Sun Sep 25, 2016 9:23 pm

hmmm, those movement are toooo fast
and those rushed tribute acenes also so fast o~o
maybe you should practice to slow down A BIT the movements
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Re: [Riott] 3D

Postby para nimo » Sun Oct 02, 2016 9:35 am

Image kick kick im getting worse
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Re: [Riott] Worse and worse

Postby Outdated » Sun Oct 02, 2016 3:10 pm

slow the spacing down, it's too fast to see the poses and movements clearly. It needs more frames, and more fleshed out anticipation for the movements. Focus more on strong poses, and less on speed.
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Re: [Riott] Worse and worse

Postby danickname » Tue Oct 04, 2016 5:11 am

I hope that you don't mind a little cnc from someone who's on a far lower level than you. Anywho, the animation is a little choppy, especially right before the "Finish It" sign hits. It also goes by a little too fast, and even though it looks neat, I think it could benefit from some stopping points whenever a hit is supposed to connect. That way, the poses would look more powerful and be way more hype inducing.
That aside, a little personal comment. If this is you during a slump, then I'm really excited to see how our battle turns out. I mean, I know it'll end with you taking that well-earned win, but I feel like the journey there'll be pretty dang beautiful, at least on your end.
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Re: [Riott] Worse and worse

Postby para nimo » Mon Oct 17, 2016 4:43 pm

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Re: [Riott] Worse and worse

Postby Outdated » Mon Oct 17, 2016 11:33 pm

the hips look off, like they are posed to face the camera while he attacks to the side. I think the stance should be turned slightly towards the target; it would look more natural, and not like the guy is crab walking. Shoulders and stuff basically add another dimension of challenge when it comes to animation. Try to move around when you don't know a move, think how your shoulder turns and your hips and try to apply that to your animation. It's a lot harder to get used to shoulders and hips, which means you have to try just as hard to make them look right.
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Re: [Riott] Worse and worse

Postby AnimationWizard » Tue Oct 18, 2016 6:12 pm

to choppy and quick, slow down all ur shit looks rushed
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Re: [Riott] failed joint

Postby para nimo » Fri Oct 28, 2016 3:14 pm

woohoo bump
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Re: [Riott] failed joint

Postby Jojishi » Fri Oct 28, 2016 3:59 pm

You might want to re-host that. It's giving me an error message.

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Re: [Riott] failed joint

Postby para nimo » Fri Oct 28, 2016 5:16 pm

Jojishi wrote:You might want to re-host that. It's giving me an error message.

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It's working just fine for me. I'll get new links
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